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Reviewed By: Brandon torres On: April 25, 2012 05:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny as hell when you made vegeta and trunks faint and what gohan said about what is it with saiyan princes and fainting |
Title: Hard to put in title
Reviewed By: keepthefaith456 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC MAKES ME SING WITH EXITMENT OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!! 100%, A+,amazing awsome astonishing wonderful weep indusing tear dock rattling Girl or boy, YOU PUT YOUR FOO(T IN THIS SHITT!!!!!!!!!! go ahead wit yo bad self
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 08, 2004 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. It was sad yet funny. I love reading fics like these. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dat twas cute ^-^ |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 22:55 EST
Comment/Review:
*screams happily*
ANOTHER BABY!! BABIES BABIES BABIES!!!!!
heh... I CANNOT believe I missed this chapter!!! *smacks herself for stupidity*
This entire story was wonderful!!! I laughed, cried, screamed (on occasion), and wanted to DESTROY those worthless bastards that DARED to touch Trunks!!!
BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 15:00 EST
Comment/Review:
AHHH!!! I LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT!!!! ^_^ HAPPY DAY!!!
Oh, and I wanna do a picture of the big happy family for you!!! ^_^ I would be able to scan it in Art Class at my school whenever I finish it, so please keep me in mind as an artist for your story!!! ^_^
I think I just realized that you had Goten wish that he could read Trunks's mind, and I don't think you ever put that part of the story into effect...did you? Oh well. It's not THAT important; the story came out perfectly fine in the end!! JOY!!! Goten's having yet ANOTHER baby!??! COOL!!! =D I love it!!! ^_^ LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!
I can't wait to read more stories from you, and please respond to me by e-mail and let me know if you'd like me to draw you some pics for your story, okay??? =D Thanks!!!! This was a wonderful sequel to the original!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: YAY!!! You took my advice for turning the baby's eyes blue!!! ^_^ THANKS!! It'll make it more fun to draw (if you would allow me to have the honor of doing so), and it makes the baby seem not so Gotenks-like, ya know what I mean? ^_^ WEE!!!!! =D |
Reviewed By: Chris On: March 31, 2003 12:30 EST
Comment/Review:
Trunks fainting is one thing...but Vegeta....::rotflmao:: BA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ::Rolls on the floor gripping stomach:: BA-HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!! ~o~ ::gets teary from laughter:: |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 02:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the best ending to this fic and I loved the whole story. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: classifyed On: March 22, 2003 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he doesn't know what to call goten HAHAHA mom or dad HAHAHA ...write more |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 19, 2003 18:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. goten and trunks baby is sooo cute and you gave the baby a pecfert name. please update soon |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: March 19, 2003 09:31 EST
Comment/Review:
I hoped it would by another firefly, but I'am also content with a boy and.....oh, vegeta with his grandchild..it's so cute! I wish our new parents the best and of course the nice author who wrote this story. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 22:30 EST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! BABY BABY BABY BABY!!!!!!!!!! O_O AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
I'm...I'm...I'm a fan of a newborn Saiyan!!! ;-; *tears come to eyes* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH BABY BABY BABY BABY BABY BA...
...AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*faints and slams onto the ground with a big "WHACK!!!" sound, feet in the air*
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Just out of curiousity, do you think the epilogue could have where the baby's eyes eventually turn blue? I onno...the black hair bit with the lock of lavander and dark eyes reminds me a lot of Gotenks, and I was kinda hoping that the baby might have blue eyes! ^_^;; I don't know, it's your story, and it's just my opinion. I LOVE IT JUST THE SAME!!! AHHH write that epilogue soon!!! O_O I CAN'T WAIT!!! *dies!!!*
PPS: Wow...Erm...my review got messed up before...O_o;;
PPPS: WHAT THE HELL IS WITH ALL THE SCREWED UP COLORS AND ARG!!!! O_o; *glares at her other two reviews* |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 22:28 EST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! BABY BABY BABY BABY!!!!!!!!!! O_O AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
I'm...I'm...I'm a fan of a newborn Saiyan!!! ;-; *tears come to eyes* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH BABY BABY BABY BABY BABY BA...
...AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*faints and slams onto the ground with a big "WHACK!!!" sound, feet in the air*
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Just out of curiousity, do you think the epilogue could have where the baby's eyes eventually turn blue? I onno...the black hair bit with the lock of lavander and dark eyes reminds me a lot of Gotenks, and I was kinda hoping that the baby might have blue eyes! ^_^;; I don't know, it's your story, and it's just my opinion. I LOVE IT JUST THE SAME!!! AHHH write that epilogue soon!!! O_O I CAN'T WAIT!!! *dies!!!*
PPS: Wow...Erm...my review got messed up before...O_o;; |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 22:26 EST
Comment/Review:
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Just out of curiousity, do you think the epilogue could have where the baby's eyes eventually turn blue? I onno...the black hair bit with the lock of lavander and dark eyes reminds me a lot of Gotenks, and I was kinda hoping that the baby might have blue eyes! ^_^;; I don't know, it's your story, and it's just my opinion. I LOVE IT JUST THE SAME!!! AHHH write that epilogue soon!!! O_O I CAN'T WAIT!!! *dies!!!* |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 15:15 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yesssss u updated I was waiting for this chap. That was breathtaken and kind of sorta hit home too. but anyway their son sounds so cute. I love this story very much and the wait was well worth it. |
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