| "Sleeping With The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
-twitch- Mooooooooooooore....
... What, you want coherent comments? -sigh- Okay, I loved the insights into Trunks' posessiveness & the contrast when Mirai asked Goten to top him. :D |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you're evil! Evil Trunks, Mirai Trunks, and seme Goten all in a room together! You're corrupting me Raven, not to mention giving me far too evil ideas! *runs away sobbing*
I look forward to that Bardocky fic... *drools* |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa, Raven, I've barely recovered from the amazing Bardock/Trunks action, and here you go with some amazing Mirai/Goten action!
This chapter was fantastic after all, considering I hated leaving Bardock behind...
Kudos for putting Trunks in his place, but man! What a wild cliffhanger!
You better keep your promise and post by Sunday, kiddo! ;-) |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yummy yummy yummy!!! I've been waiting for this lemon for a very long time!! *drowns in puddle of drool*
Yep, I finally got to read it...Now back to my hacker problem ;) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
SM: Why am I reviewing? You already know that I love you and this whole damn fiction! Why am I reviewing!?
TheBoy: Because she'll kill you if you dont...
SM: Oh ya... heh... I loved it dear!! The lemon was soooooo beautiful and sweet and... uh oh, PASS ME MY DENTURES! MY TEETH ARE STARTING TO FALL OUT!
TheBoy: *rolls his eyes*
SM: Anywho... I can't wait to see what you have goin on next ^_^ I'm itchin to see a bitch fight!! wooo!! *grabs one of those hard hats with can holders on each side, and flops on the couch to get comfy*
Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*moans in sympathy* The only Son I kindda like, poor lil guy's gonna be so hurt! *pouts*
*eyes grow wide* LOOK AT ME!!! NOO! I REFUSE TO FEEL SYMPATHY FOR THAT-
*whimpers* Poor lil Trunksie and Goten...
GAH! *beats head* You're evil Raven... trying to convert me! It won't work!
O.o'
Heh... love the yummy Bardockyness, of course. Lovely work. I look forward to more. I'm gonna go drown myself in Vejita smut now to get these images in my head... pretty as the images are... I feel so guilty... *whimper* |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*drrrroooooolllllllll*
*tries vainly to clear delicious images of Bardock from her head in fear of Jita's wrath*
How could you do this? *sobs* I've been ripped from my Jita-koi with these sultry yummy *begins to drool again* oh-so delicious, muscular...
Jita: JAAAAAAADYYYYYYY!
EEEPppp... *runs away*
Gonna go read next chappie! *squeal*
Jita: *pouts* What about me?
Jady: What about yo-- we'll play later! I'll bring Bardock! *grin*
Jita: *smirk* Sounds like fun... |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beginning to see why you like Trunks/Goten so much... mmmmmm... yummy kissies *purr*
If it wasn't two in the morning, I'd read the next two chapters... but it's two in the morning... *sleepy yawn* so I'll read them tomorrow when I can comprehend words once again. ^_^' |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my... god... I can't breathe, Raven!
That was so intense. Why did you have to end the chapter, why??? Please tell me you're going to have a flashback in the next chapter!
Yeah, it's nice that Goten gets to fix Trunks up and all, but damn - that Bardock/Trunks action was just so... so... damn! I can't breathe!
I think this is my favorite of your fics so far.
Damn! Does anybody have any icewater? |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 07:16 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! I luv this fic!!!
Its greeeeaaat!!! Please update soon!! I luv it! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 07:12 CST
Comment/Review:
WHOOO that was good! More more more more more! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
*growls, holding up her author beating stick*
now then... WHERE is thine chapter thou promised me?
don't make me take after u with the beating stick! you KNOW i will! *smirks and winks*
please hurry!! the antsyness is KILLING me love!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 22:54 CST
Comment/Review:
good greif!! why havent you updated yet!? its been over a month for pete's sake!!!
what will it take for you to write more???? I'll give you ANYTHING you want
you want a beer? its yours
money?
cars?
name it!!
just PLEASE update!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holds the lovely author beating stick behind her back and whistles innocently*
My dear, DEAR Raven... YOU FREAKING ROCK!! And you said you were no good at the rough stuff... LIAR LIAR PANTS ON FIRE!!
I must agree with Bardockgurl that this was WELL worth the wait ^_^
JUST PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT THAT LONG OF A WAIT NEXT TIME!! I have no desire to whip out TWO beating sticks... *smirk*
And thank you for the dedication ^_^ so glad I annoyed u enough into posting!!
LOVE YOU!!!
*huggle* |
Reviewed By: Black Dragons Gothic child [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know im late in revewing this but come on..... WHAT HAPPENS NEXT??????? come on out with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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