| "For Crying Out Loud!" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 21:36 CST
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Deep and very well written, in fact, i'm kinda sad its over. That was a great peice of fiction, i must commend you on that. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: February 02, 2003 18:50 CST
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Okay now, i just left a review for the last 3 chapters and found another one was posted in the meantime, so here's another review. ^_^ So, its over (sniff sniff.) Well, I loved it. The mission turned out to be theraputic as a side bonus, hmm or maybe that was part of the mission from the beginning. I guess only you know that though. Can't wait to see what you come up with next, or maybe panthera tigris tigris. Ha ha. I'm one to talk. When was the last time I updated? (starts whistlings innocently) Okay I'm writing a book here, so I'm gonna go now. Thanks for sharing with us! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: February 02, 2003 18:38 CST
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That was beautiful. I'm going to hate to see it end though. :( |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could tell it was a flashback. Brought on by the situation, right? Your are doing great with the foreshadowing!
I am on the edge of my seat right now nearly biting my nails wondering what's going to happen next!
Waiting with baited breath,
~Ami |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: February 01, 2003 20:51 CST
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This is good! definitely not what I was expecting. Cant wait to see how this works out. (grins evilly as visions of Yamcha getting his butt whooped) |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Wow things sure heated up for Vegeta and Layla aka Bulma. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is getting good I want to know more lol keep it up |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: January 31, 2003 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chap keep it coming !! Cant wait for what u come up with next! As in for the block dont worry it happens to the best of us! so cheer up u r doing fantastic I love the carguy image for Geta MMMMMMM! *screwing him on the cuda* YUP ! I like it !
:P |
Reviewed By: mydecember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so hilarious!!!! i seriously don't like yamcha eitehr but i GUESS having him in this fic is ok. goku is so gullible!!! that just makes it even funnier!!!!!
if there was ever such a thing as a hilarious hentai story, this is it. 10 outta 10! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 31, 2003 20:39 CST
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I was going to go on and on about how evil you were for leaving us hangin like that. bad author! But then I read your a/n and okay fine, you've got a point. we do want the story to continue, but no more teasin'. :P Heh heh. Yamcha gonna go start some crap, huh? can't wait to see that! :) update soon |
Reviewed By: lillithan On: January 29, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It's even better than mine! |
Reviewed By: korik1 On: January 27, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: January 27, 2003 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it Please update sooonnnnnnnn!!! and yes please put some lemony fresh in it *hentai grin*
Keep it up !!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 08:20 CST
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Okay, Bulma has gotten their attention, hasn't she? I think a little citrus would be wonderful! Of course Veggie will probably think she has completely lost her mind. It'll be great! As for the music choices, heh, I knew I had heard them. I just don't remember titles very well. I was listening to Cannon in D, thinking 'where've I heard this?' My wedding! Doh! (slaps self in the head and feels very stupid.)So anyway, I'd have to go with Moonlight and Cannon as my 2 choices. Cant wait to see what happens next time. |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: January 27, 2003 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting juicy, keep it up. I'm really loving it! The comedy is so original, but yes we do need some citrus in the next chap. Oh and some lemon too...errr...(blushes & ashamed of myself). Anyway, update soon!!! |
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