| "A Dangerous Love" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 09:58 CDT
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Oh no. He's all pleased with himself cuz he thinks he beat the crap out of luana...but its bulma...he's following luana....but he thinks its bulma...Ack, bad thoughts, bad thoughts. Yikes, I don't like where this is going. *pulls out plastic lightsaber and proceeds to bonk veggie on the head* |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 09:07 CDT
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Ack! My poor Veggie-kun. Come here baby, mischief will make it all better. Heh heh. Damn, so I can see that this will not turn out well. Bulma's going to fight Vegeta. Hope they have some senzu. Of course no one will give it to her because they think she's Luana! Noooo! Update. Update. Update |
Reviewed By: bise b On: April 28, 2003 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet fic..but how could you stop that chapter like that..your so horible..haha..hope we get to find out what happens soon, |
Reviewed By: Smiles_va16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2003 13:48 CDT
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It was good but short write more soon k sorry i snapped on you today i was really hungry!!! keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: YEAH! On: April 16, 2003 17:38 CDT
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update more, I love your description, plzzz update soon! |
Reviewed By: Mala Valvah On: April 15, 2003 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, Bulma. What will become of her? Do update soon. |
Reviewed By: Unknown On: April 15, 2003 16:01 CDT
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Update soon please! I'm yearning for more! KILL THAT STUPID BITCH LUANA! AND CELERINA! Poor Bulma :( The Sire stole her energy (The bitch) Is there planet really being taken over? ARE THEY GOING TO MONTEAZUL FOR NOTHING! IS IT A TRAP!!? I NEED TO KNOW! DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE LUANA!!!!!! MORE CHAPTERS! MORE MORE MORE MORE! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! *Hentai grin* AND MORE LEMON! You're awesome at lemon, we need more, more more more! I can't wait for the next chapter, hope we get to read about the tournament thingy!! YEAH! UPDATE SOON! ^_^!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 09:58 CDT
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Things just keep getting more bizarre. The sire is pissing me off, and I'm beginning to wonder if the people they're supposed to fight even exist. Hmm, guess I just have to wait to find out. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 20:32 CDT
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Thank GOD U UPDATED!!!!
What is wrong with BULMA@!!!!!!!!!!!!
LUANA DIEEE U BITCH oh I hate her me no liky!
And Sire what the fuckI hate her too!!!!
Please another chapy soon!!!!!!
Later! |
Reviewed By: Manda On: April 01, 2003 17:03 CST
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it was a good chap. keep writing so i can read more Luana needs to get her own man and stay away from vegeta!!! |
Reviewed By: mihoshi On: March 20, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this story is great. i love the way vegeta and bulma are always thinking how much they love eachother and then have to be assholes to eachother in real life. its really great and ive been hooked! THE ONLY PROBLEM IS WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS HERE PEOPLE CMON!!!!! GET A CHAPTER 10 GOIN ON AND FINISH IT BEFORE I HAVE A HEART ATTACK! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO!! Vegeta and Luanna!!!!! God damn IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOONNN! Cause I want Luannas skany ass Kicked!!!
I hate her !!!!
UPDATE SOON OR I'll diE!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 17:43 CST
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Oh yes luana must die!!! and just for today, she gets to choose which lovely death she shall partake in.
Here are the choices:
1. flamethrower
2. firing squad
3. run over by my car
4. eaten by my dog
5. donated to Bulma for the good of science
6. chopped up by chainsaw and fed to the blood thirsty dbz fans
whew! okay I'm done wishing death on luana. Vegeta's plan better be damn good or I'll have to torture him (and I'm not talking about the good kinda torture here.)
Update! |
Reviewed By: unknown On: March 06, 2003 14:50 CST
Comment/Review:
update...i want more |
Reviewed By: Lisa On: March 05, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update now! It's going great...*hentai grin* oh yeah, i hate luana! She gets what she deserves right? right? |
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