| "A Dangerous Love" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: TabrisXVII [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 14:03 CST
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Mwee! This story just gets better and better! pllllleeeeeaasse keep adding new chapters...or else i might have to become Very Incredibly Annoying on MSN messenger....and you wouldnt want that now would you! ^^
Great work! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 23:41 CST
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ohhhh please continue |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:10 CST
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Woohoo! Hear that guys, the lemon's all for me :P Ha ha ha! But I guess I'll share! Hee hee! Uh anyway, I was going to review anyway, but I got a little sidetracked after the A/N. Okay, so what the hell? Where's he gonna go? Aaahhhh! This is no good. She'll probably have to drag him back. Ack! kids are smashing popcorn into the carpet. gotta go. update soon. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 15:06 CST
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Aaaahhh! It was a dream??!!! Why you teasing...Uh sorry. I tend to get carried away. Well, at least she stumbled upon him getting undressed, so I guess that somewhat makes up for it. : ) I like what you've done so far, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: TabrisXVII [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 13:08 CST
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Wow! This is a great fanfic...suffice to say the beginning certainly grabs your attention! And the quality of your work really is very good...something of a rarity these days! ^^ You definately have to post more chapters up soon! |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 12:01 CST
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Yay you updated! ^^ ACK EVIL!! Your such a cruel person making us all think the next chappie would be a continuous lemon, nice twist though ^_~
Lol, Gawd I'd do ANYTHING if could have been Bulma walking in on Veg naked like that XD! **Drools**
Fantasticalistic chapter ^^! dun think thats a real word o_o" **shrugs** oh well.
Can't wait to read what happens next
Update Soonerz!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 22:37 CST
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drools............. ohhhhh continue... |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: January 23, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a first chapter, usually the only fics that start as lemons are oneshots. Did you have to leave us hanging there? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oooo...Super Saiyan sex. Very nice. Not even I have the courage to write about that. ^_^ Good job! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very kool way to start a lemon...with a lemon! lol I hope you continue soon! Its going great! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 14:10 CST
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Hey who needs the boring stuff anyway, right? Lemon is the perfect way to start a story. I must say though, that was not very nice getting us all into that scene and ending it there! Aaaaahhhh! You better update soon damn it! |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 13:35 CST
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Whoa...straight into the lemon 0_o! Lol, I always wondered if his...erm...**blushes** kinda got bigger when super saiya-jin.
Great Chapter, Need to read more! ^^"
Update soon please |
Reviewed By: TabrisXVII [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 14:22 CST
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As with previous chapters, this is really great! Please keep going! ^^ |
Reviewed By: unknown On: March 27, 2003 16:52 CST
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Very good, more! MORE! NOW! KILL THAT BICH LUANA!! DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE! *hentai grin* I'm alright now, Vegeta you better not be sleeping with luana just for your pleasure or i'll hurt you!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Smiles_va16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 11:13 CDT
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That was a really good chap. That Sire is such a b****! She needs to take a hike off a cliff. Keep writing I look forward to whats going to happen next!
P.s. Hurry up and have Bulma tell Vegeta she loves him! It's driving me crazy that he's with that stupid whore! |
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