| "A Dangerous Love" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amanda On: March 05, 2003 07:53 CST
Comment/Review:
It was good but i wish i diddn't have to review every single time!!! write more[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: March 03, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weeeeeell, even though Vegeta is MINE! *Glares at everyone else* I suppose I wouldn't mind if he slept with Luana...AS LONG! As he had a perfectly good reason for doing so! He best not be doing it for the pleasure the little son of a bich..neways yeah, Luana I HATE YOU! HAHAHA! I HOPE VEGETA KILLS YOUR AZZ! -_- though if Vegeta sleeps with her I'm going to be so upset!! I guess I'll just have to see what happens...*Sigh* Will you update already! I'm going mad! and oh yeah...LUANA YOU'RE ALSO A BICH FOR LOCKING BULMA OUT! HOW COULD YOU! GRRR! KILL HER KILL HER KILL HER![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah I forgot. hee hee. Nice bit o' lemon there. we want more! More I tell you!!! Gotta have my daily dose of hentai you know![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 19:25 CST
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Luana, you skank! Get the hell outta there before I chase you down with my chainsaw!!! Muwahahahaha! Hmm, while I'm at it, I should torture Veggie boy a little! Now where did I put that leather mask again....[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARRHGGGGG!!!! LUANA U SLUTTTTTTT!!!!!! OH I HATE HER!!!
*YEAH MEE TOO I WANT THAT WHORE DEAD NO ONE TOUCHES VEGETA*
Yeah !! for ones sycho self we agree
*Yeah but dont get use to it *
I loved the chp please update soonnnn!!
*DONT BEG THAT UNBECOMING OF A WARRIOR*
Im not a warrior
*OH YEAH U WISH MAY BE THE VEGETA MIGHT GET A SHOT AT U!*
WHY UUUUU!!! BICHHH AHHHHHHH!
*HAHAHAHA BYE FOR NOW Before I forget when is the next lemon going to be? >:D
Ahem sorry and Please kill Luana soon ja ne ?
Later![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:47 CST
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Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! ERK ERK ERK ERK ERK!!! Poor Bulmy, she should just fess up about her feelings now or else shes going to be put through a lot of pain....but that wouldnt be much of a story then would it? ^_~"
And ACK! .________.!! EVIL EVIL EVIL Luana! I've told you I hate her already, shes a great character but it doesnt mean I have to like her @_@!
I've got a pretty good idea of whats going to happen, and I'm just hoping that I'm not right =S!
Great chapter!
UPDATE SOON'ERZ! Really need to read more ^____^"[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: kjh On: March 02, 2003 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! PLEASE UPDATE A NEW CHAPTER SOON! REALLY SOON!!! thanx.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: March 02, 2003 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasps* HOW COULD HE!!? *sobs* Mean ole Veggie-head! Put the next chapter out soon!..like..NOW!...Luana better mind her own business...[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Seak5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT FLICK!!! ^-^
I like it, your a really good writer and those lemon hints, whoooeeee*fans myself*IS IT HOT IN HERE OR WHAT?!
Your story and plot is coming along nicely and the way you portrayed Vegeta was interesting usually when I read a V/B flick his character is totaly out of context. (Soft, mushy, etc.)
I like this Vegeta, very cocky and a man who knows that he's sexually attractive.^_^
This Luana chick is interesting I wonder if she's going to cause problems between V/B. Oh, well I'll just have to wait and find out. Can't wait for the next update!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: February 18, 2003 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I REVIEWED B4 YOU COULD TELL ME TOO HA NO REALLY THAT CHAP WAS REALLY GOOD VEGETA IS BEING MEAN THO THANX FOR WRITING AND WRITE MORE SOON!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 08:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn Krillin and his impecable timing! Oh well. update soon.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 17, 2003 19:00 CST
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HOT DAMN!!!!!!!!! I love those kind of confrontations between B/V what is better that a heated argument that leads to a great lemon or citrusy situation so thumbs up on that one. LOVE THE YAMCHA BASHING !!!! YAMCHA U PUSSY!!!
Cant wait for the next chapy !
Oh yeah before I forget when is the next lemon coming? *hentai grinn*
Later!! :)[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh....bad veggie! You shouldnt say stuff like that to Bulma! =| **slaps his wrist**
Vegeta: **Glares**
Me: **Backs away slowly** uh....whoops...I think I've set him off X_x! *runs away screaming*
Vegeta: **blinks** ...Baka Woman -.-"
Hehe, neways great chapter....but Awwww poor bulmy, oh well I'm sure she'll get over it. Good to see shes tagging along with the rest of them though.....now I wonder whats going to take place on this little trip if both Geta' and Bulmy are going ^_~ **wink wink**
Please update soon! ^_^"[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: TabrisXVII [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 14:14 CST
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OMG! This is amazing! I honestly thought it couldnt get any better but i was wrong! I love your style of writing...its so beautiful! ^^ Also ...the cut to Bulma's thoughts was very well implemented, it creates a pause in the main story without slowing it down! Great work - very well written - cant wait to see more chapters![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: February 12, 2003 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I know you said i had to write a long review but my bite marks hurt It was really good You should write more I want to know why you don't write more You are a really good writer anywho I can't wait to read more!![ Request Review Removal ] |
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