| "A Dangerous Love" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheeeee......long chapter dude! Yay ^^' you should make more chapters this long!! =) But then we have to wait more...which sux x.x..Neways good chapter, nice twists.
And so much happening aswell, Hm hm...I still dont like that Luana person, and I certainly don't trust her...blah! =P
And weeee! another lemon treat, but argh! Not a proper juicy one lol XD I guess I'll just have to sit tight and wait .____.! hehe
See, I was so right about Luana being a part of that ebil lil sceme of kidnapping Bulmas rents. ^^"
Keeps Going! Update soonerz! =)
Fab Chapter. ^_^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: peanut butta On: February 08, 2003 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi amby that wuz a GREAT story keep up the good writing up date soon!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 20:12 CST
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good chapter. i liked veggie beatin up on yamcha! ha ha. so when will bulma and vegeta be on speaking terms again?[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: February 03, 2003 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a really good chapter(5) I wish i could read 6 also 'hint hint'[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 16:49 CST
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Ack...erk erk erk erk erk....Ok you already know this but I already hate Luana...shes getting in the way of Veg and Bulmys relationship...well she isnt...but I have this really bad feeling she will! Nuuu! She needs to be stomped on o_o! hehe
Anyways, great chapter!
I'm guessing she has something to do with Bulmas rents dissapearence ne?
Update Soonerz please![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: January 31, 2003 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story behind it and even though I don't watch dbz, I still love this story. Good job and keep the chapters coming!!! Love ya lots[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 22:11 CST
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aww poor kitty... sniffels
lol keep going[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: liv On: January 30, 2003 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
great...plz continue before i got hostile..i need to know...on...the...edge...UPDATE![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Jake On: January 30, 2003 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!I just read the whole fic through, and the rents can't be gone! NO! I love them..they are soooo cute! ~blushes some~ I loved the lemon scene, pure gold, update soon! They aren't really missing are they? NOOOO! UPDATE!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 17:21 CST
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Hmm, this can't be good. Someone probably kidnapped them to ransom them off for patents or something! Maybe Vegeta can show up next chapter to help find them! ^_~ good chapter.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 16:57 CST
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Lol, Ok so now I remember why I used to love Goku so much. He can be so dim witted at times its just cute. Poor kitty! XD! hmm, wonder where Bulmys rents have gone....
I wanna read more, so update soonerz!
Brill Chapter.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:14 CST
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Awws, Poor Veggie...poor Bulma Waahh!! .__."
They better get their asses back together, they're such a kawaii couple. But...I doubt that's going to be such a simple task ne?
Oh well I'll stop guessing what happens next and just let you get on with telling the story,
so yah hurry up and update!
Great Chapter.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: amber waves On: January 27, 2003 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Now please get on with it![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Powerful chick On: January 27, 2003 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahahahahaha!!!!!! I knew someone would start a fanfic like that!!!!!! MAKE MORE FANFICS!!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: TabrisXVII [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 14:03 CST
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Mwee! This story just gets better and better! pllllleeeeeaasse keep adding new chapters...or else i might have to become Very Incredibly Annoying on MSN messenger....and you wouldnt want that now would you! ^^
Great work![ Request Review Removal ] |
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