| "Father, Mother, Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: Exodia Ishtal On: September 23, 2003 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I must say I am trying very hard not to cry. This is probly the best fanfict I've ever read. And against the majority I actually liked the ending.
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Reviewed By: Shizukai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. Going to read no. II now... |
Reviewed By: J-Dawg On: July 17, 2003 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very depressing, but in a weird way, it had a happy ending. Now they can live together in a better place without pain. Whatever made you write this fic must've been very strong and influential. I enjoyed it... :) |
Reviewed By: Kitten On: July 03, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your grammer needs work but who cares, that can easily be fixed. A story like yours cannot be fixed up with a simple program. :) What I'm saying is I really enjoyed reading this story...hated the ending but it worked. |
Reviewed By: tears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 19:42 CDT
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it's so sad, but at least they died happy right? sort of freaky that they all died in the end though. i guess in a way i like the ending but i...anyway i like this story. *no idea what to write now* i feel deppressed now.*sigh* |
Reviewed By: Aida [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my did I love this! It was such a sad story ;_; I'm must read more from you if all your stories are THIS good! ^^ |
Reviewed By: ashley On: June 17, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have done itagain this is anoother of your fanfics i have read and im shocked a how talented you are! that was the best fanfic i have read thus far it was so tragic and sad! i loved your ending it was shocking and left me in tears, really! the story was so complete and detailed it was amazing im gonna have all my friends read i oo! thanks so much for letting me enjoy ths story, it really touched my heart. the tragic endingmade you cry but made you smile at the thought o them all hoping to meet each other in a pain free afterlife , like romeo and juliet! it was simply wonderful! bravo and keep up the good work!thanks -----ashley |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: June 10, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey loved the first chapter. i never read a fan fic where ryou was abused before meeting bakura. this is a real good book. i feel bad for ryou though. thats so sad.~~starts crying~~ email me at sesshomarugurl00 if you write some more fan fics like that or any others. |
Reviewed By: karebear On: May 16, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An extremly compelling first chapter. I am riveted. A little more detail could be added, but it wouldn't hurt not to change a thing. |
Reviewed By: kaibadreamer On: April 27, 2003 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is there to really say... I don't know...how about WTF!!! Okay, maybe I missed something, but those deaths seemed to come out of nowhere. If you were going for the unexpected, You achieved it. It almost made me cry. Overall, this was an excellent and very dramatic fic. I would have prefered a happier ending, or at least a slightly more realistic one, I mean what are the chances that they would all die? Anyway I enjoyed and you did a wonderful job! |
Reviewed By: Isis On: April 27, 2003 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I .... I don't know what to say. I'm crying and trying very hard not to yell and/or scream at you for killing all of them. I mean I was expecting maybe, possibly one but all four ... I ... damn and now I have to go and admit that I still think the story was great.
Love ya girl and I can't wait for your next fic.
Isis. |
Reviewed By: darkfox On: April 25, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fox- that is so sad**cries**
yamifox-my light is to emotional but i have to give u a good job for the fic |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: April 24, 2003 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
You...you...you killed them!
You killed all of them!
Not even Yami and Yugi got to live happily ever after!
Why? Why did you....WAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Cody's Muse-- Ignore her, she loved it she's just being dramatic.
Pain-- I know I loved it, that's my kinda fic!
Evil, angst, pain, destruction and death and suicide!
What's not to love?
Are all of your stories like this?
Cody's muse-- Seek therapy Pain.
But her lawsuit against the psychiatrist is still pending.
She isn't allowed within 500 feet of the building.
Cody's Muse-- Well what do you expect when you hang a psychiatrist out of a fifth floor window by their ankles?
Pain-- She said I have people issues and that I should learn to trust in others more. I said her first. She's the one with issues.
I'm surprised you aren't still in jail!
Pain--The guards were afraid of me.
Cody's Muse-- So they let you loose on society again?
What a messed up system.
We got off track. Please keep writing, just don't hurt the pretty bishies anymore than you have to, they are very very dear to me!!! |
Reviewed By: anime AndrAIa On: April 24, 2003 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, it's me off of ff.n Did the sight really delete the fic? those bastards. Anyhoo, I loved the fic. It's taken me about a full two minutes to stop crying and my eyes keep watering. I loved this completely and eventhoogh it was deleted on ff.n it should still be in my favourites section. anyhoo, please write more fics! and maybe the NC-17 category will come back to ff.n then you can repost the fic.
and I really liked the ending. Sure it was quick but it worked well. And it's almost kinda happy in a way because they all knew that they would meet in another life...
~Taryn~ |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 23:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really upset that ffnet took this off their site. Let me guess why: content. *sigh*
This fic was really great and I'm glad to see it posted here. However, the ending, I must agree with the majority was a little too abrupt, but it's your story. It was still great, though. |
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