| "Father, Mother, Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww and thing were so good. good chapter update soon. |
Reviewed By: TLC On: April 13, 2003 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No! Bakura saw the tape!! I hope he dosen't kill Yami! Please update soon! By the way, Someone reported Father, Mother, Lover To fanfiction.net and had it deleated! |
Reviewed By: Kami On: April 12, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
MOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEE MUST READ MORE !!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sora The Elf On: April 10, 2003 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was so sad... i really do hope you continue, i suddgest that you put Yaio with Yami/yugi, and Bakura/Ryou. But if not, put it so its a happy ending ^.^() i just love happy endings |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: April 06, 2003 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going, darn you! |
Reviewed By: SarahBabyGirl On: April 06, 2003 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sarah: very grose... Yami raped ryou...i know it was the only way but.... anyway.., please make the bakura/ryou & yami/yugi couples! And make it so Bakura finds out about the tape, but doesnt get mad or pissed at Yami.... I really think Ryou should be happy with his new family too.
Maru: dont i have a sya in this!?
S: Sure... well what is it?
M: i agree with my hikari (smiles and kisses her hikari on the forhead protectivly) but i do think we should get some action... not rape... but love, like between Marik & Malik... or Ryou/Bakura or the Y/Y couples... except it should be when they are all a little older!
S:You do know your too protective...:)
M: i know... please accept our ideas and maybe use them? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEEEEE! Yea Ryou lived! Awwwww Kawaii fluff I love fluff! I love this story update again soon please!!!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: Yay! Ryou is Okay!
LD: Yay vengence! Oh, some evil dads are gonna get their asses kicked!
Karen: Yay!
LD: *looks strangely at her alter ego*
Karen: What? I can like violence too!
LD: *shrugs* Whatever. Please update soon! This is getting really good.
Karen: Besides, I wanna see Malik!
LD: *rolls eyes at Karen* |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: March 31, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO DEATH! Make a happy ending! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Fairy Magic On: March 31, 2003 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go for number one. I need a happy ending! |
Reviewed By: royu lover On: March 30, 2003 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooo not him not him. DON'T LET HIM DIE! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 11:32 CST
Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! DON'T KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU KILL HIM I'LL REFUSE TO READ IT!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryou can't die. he got to live. so he can find out life got it's good side to. |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: March 30, 2003 08:51 CST
Comment/Review:
iyaa daaaaaaaa!
ryou can't dead >_ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: No, no, no. You cannot kill my sweetie-pie!
LD: I am not going to argue with her on this one. You should see her, she looks dangerous
Karen: Yes, this is supposed to be an angsty sad fic and it has been. Good for you. But you just can't kill Ryou. Please *falls to her knees sobbing* Please spare him. Give him the happy ending. Please *sobs*
LD: *whispers so Karen cannot hear* I want Ryou to live too, but I think it would be cool if you branched out and did a character death. so I guess that is one and a half votes for Ryou to live. Either way please udate soon! |
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