| "Father, Mother, Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ayumu On: February 07, 2003 19:13 CST
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Oooooooh, interesting. Poor Ryou. o_O; You like torturing him don't you? XD Pleeeeeeeease continue! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: February 06, 2003 22:51 CST
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Cool. Okay I love my Ryou and everything but are we ever getting to Yuugi? I'm just curious I thought we'd been waiting a couple chapters for him... Anyways! Please have more super-soon! Arigato!
(Not to sound to stupid and cliche but Breakfast really is the most important meal of the day. I have learned this the hard way.) ^____^ Jaaa! |
Reviewed By: Danielle On: February 02, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: February 01, 2003 18:07 CST
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That was good! o.O Very different. *nodnod* Continue, please. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Celes On: February 01, 2003 15:51 CST
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Yes! Go you! Finally a fic where Bakura isn't the bad guy. Not only that, he's actually nice! ^__^ Please write more. |
Reviewed By: LilBit On: February 01, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Poor poor Ryou. Please add more soon, you kind of left a cliffhanger there. Yami and Bakura taking care of foster children, I never expected that lol. That's why you get a 10 for originality. |
Reviewed By: Danielle (again) ^.^ & W.S. # 2 On: February 22, 2003 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Im back!!!!! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY ^_^
(looks at W.S.#2 Taking off her shirt) O_O ? . Ill come Here everyday till ya update |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It was unusual to find in this story that the bad guy was the father and Bakura was nice. Not that it matters, I like Bakura. Well I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 30, 2003 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohh..I like it. It's great! Please have more soon!!! ^_^ They should adopt Yuugi too that would be so cool! ^-^
My Poor Ryou-chan...*sniff* that stuff is really horrible. I still wanna read though! UPDATE! Arigato! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Son Cara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *sniff* love this story, you should draw for it! Anyway, please continue, okay tommorow or the day after please set up another chapter, i can't help if i love it when people are kidnapped! i'm sorry okay? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: March 31, 2003 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea! I fixed my comp and there were two new chapters waiting for me! I love this story! Please let Ryou live! I want him to live happily ever after with Bakura and Yami and Yugi! No cute Hikari death please!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sora On: April 14, 2003 11:16 CDT
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OMG!!!!! Whats yami gonna do when bakura tells him what he saw.... are they still gonna be friends... plz hurry & finish |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 12:37 CST
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This is so sad. Poor Ryou and Yugi. I guess if Yami and Bakura are going to save Ryou and Yugi, then Yami and Ryou are going to have to... yeah. There really isn't a 'good' option, just a lesser of evils. I say do what has to be done to get Ryou and Yugi back with Yami and Bakura. |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* What a sad ending!!! Freaky how one bad event leads to the corruption of innocent minds.
Romance muse, aka 'Star': Where did you hear that?
Nowhere. I just felt like saying it. Anyway. I waited SO LONG to read this because my computer wouldn't load the pages properly the first time. It's a really good story! Bye bye!!
~Shade and Star~ |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 08:34 CST
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~_^ cool story. I got hooked on your stories after reading Pharaoh's Gift and I think that you are 1 good author. Now I need sleep. |
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