| "Father, Mother, Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gee, i havent been on MMO in the longest time... been fanfic deprived... lol, so thats the ending for this fic? figures itd be something crazy like that. im half glad they died, though it really wasnt nessary. the ending was a bit quick, but it was a really good fic. damn it, u have so much talent! ^^ ill go on to ur other new fic now... need to catch up on the happenings of fanfiction |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: April 17, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. I'm not one to give people bad reps because of their stories, but WTF?!?!?!????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Death is bad. I think you should have made a happy ending. Well, good day to you, person. =/ |
Reviewed By: Just Me On: April 17, 2003 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've followed this fic from the beginning and I must say I loved it, but the ending was too abrupt. Death is just a way to get out of writing a true story. |
Reviewed By: ChibiChibi On: April 17, 2003 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! WTF! why is it so sad... im still crying from the ending.. i hope its better if you right the sequel to it... by the way, plz do... i just wanted a happy ending for it.... omg.... so sad |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa what a ending. waaaaaaa they all die waaaaaaaaaaaa. |
Reviewed By: Yami Girl On: April 16, 2003 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU _DID NOT_ JUST KILL RYOU!!! *SCREAMS* I DID NOT JUST READ THAT!!! Yes it was an awsome story up until the end. I DON'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!!! That was SO NOT a happy ending! *sigh* gomen nesai. I didn't mean this to be a flame. I just don't like to see my fave chariters die after already going though so much. any way it is a good story up until the end. I have to admit this story had me crying an awful lot. well Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: That was terrible.
LD: Not in a "that story sucked" sort of way, just a "that was a horribly tragic ending" sort of way.
Karen: hm m m, I guess it never really was a 'happy' story, so the ending fits...
LD: It was almost rediculous...almost. I mean, I can understand Ryou 'jumping' out of the window, he had a shitty life. But with the other three, well, if the way you had written it had been different, it would have just seemed dumb, but your style made it work... I don't think I said that right.
Karen: Probably not, but I think it is at least coherent. It bordered on excessive but did not cross the line. All in all a really good, tragic story.
LD: And that, my friends, is that. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: April 16, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! just thought you'd like to know that chapters 22 and 23 are the same chapter. And that cliffies are evil!!!!! update again soon please! |
Reviewed By: Oni (LovelySchoolGurlShindou) On: April 15, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really good! You must have the next chapter soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: April 15, 2003 13:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ME:OMG! HE SAW THE TAPE!?!?!?!?!?*faints*
Blue Mage:*nudges ME with her foot* Uh, yeah... please update before that happens again. PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Kami On: April 14, 2003 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey It's me again. You have been workin. Please put up the next chappy soon . ; ) |
Reviewed By: fairy magic On: April 14, 2003 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, why was this taken off fanfiction.net? Anyone know? Whatever. I'm not sure about that site anymore. It's been deleting alot of good fanfics.
Well, yours is very good so far, and I mean VERY good! Hurry and update please!^_^ |
Reviewed By: White Phoenix On: April 14, 2003 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! You stop there?! This is sooooo good, but if anything bad happens to Ryou and Yugi again, I will send mean letters to you!>=D So please be nice! Make it a happy ending, with the good stuff!^_~ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 21:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: I cannot BELIEVE that you just did that. You are EVIL.
LD: *smiles sweetly* I though I was evil.
Karen: That too. Ooooh, you had just better make this better or I swear, so help me... |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww and thing were so good. good chapter update soon. |
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