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Reviewed By: Silo101 On: May 04, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost laughed my head off at the ending, lol soutas only like what....8 how the hell does he know what just happened? the ending was funny though
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: sesshylover10 On: April 22, 2005 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this it was very good very creative people that read this will defintley luv it. signed: sesshylover10
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohy me... it was so sweet. and none of that angsty crud that I seem to have some perverse need to write when I do lemons... oh thank the heavens. Wait, no, actually, thank you. :0) ~Dark Avenger
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Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: Mega Dawg [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first perfect score I gave. I read this one a while ago but never reviewed it. Please write a sequel!
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Title: Archery
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 16:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: light kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha the beginning was a bit funny... but i can't believe kags family is absolutely ok with that!... i mean even sota was listening! and i thought m,oms are supposed to be just a bit over protective somehow. oh well its good
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with the first reviewer this story just screams SEQUEL! and perverted family.... id be sooo embaressed if my family did that, lol funny but perverted ending! yay! ^_^ good job! ^_- have a cookie -gives cookie-
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Reviewed By: AndreahTreole [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a funny ending, it was hilarious. Good job !
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Reviewed By: MirokuBabi On: September 28, 2004 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! YOU ARE A GREAT LEMON WRITER! I BOW TO YOU! *bows*
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Reviewed By: Japanimania On: September 19, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made her family perverted good job
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
laughs about funny ending ^.~ u r good
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha I bet that's the first time a guy was happy to lose a bet! Great lemon!! The ending was really funny too!! Good job! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MirokuMinded On: July 06, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD i liked that a lot but...*eye twitches ...and twitches again...* her MOM and GRANDPA?!?!?! WATCHING?!?!?! *shudders* o thats creepy. but very funny indeed! XD
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Reviewed By: LonelyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
lolz i loved the ending :)
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahhaahhahaah
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