| "Archery" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 00:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Mildly voyeuristic end, but without being kinky or nasty. Well done!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
halerious ending
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was cool! dose kagome ever have a perverted family!!! lol sounds like something that my parents would do! anyways keep writing, from your friend, maria....ja ne
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Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune On: December 30, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up^__^
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Reviewed By: Angel452 On: October 03, 2003 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, was there a written legend at the shrine that Kagome never knew about? Wow! I wonder if it is in her history book. Haha!
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Reviewed By: Calinda On: July 10, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very wonderful story. Keep writing i enjoyed it immensely, especially the ending |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! This was fantastic! I loved it! There was a plot there and you should continue it. You could explore everyone's reaction to the 'new' relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha. Not to mention.. *clears her throat* the obvious lack of protection. ~_^ See, there's a sequel if I ever saw one! ^_^
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: xi_hou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding. I loved the whole "negative silence" bit. ;-) |
Reviewed By: Sapphire Sphinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. I really loved how you made the cat a hentai. |
Reviewed By: Crazyinulover On: March 13, 2003 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey they only go up to 10 but this is a 100! A++! anyways good fic I hope you write many more like it and the sota evesdropping is hilarious! |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 23:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I literally applauded at the end, I swear! lol omg, that was fabulous! *cackles wickedly* all of them watching/listening/commenting was hilarious! lmao I loved it! |
Reviewed By: :) On: February 09, 2003 13:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I agree with Hisaki, the end creeped me out a bit. Except I still didn't like Sota listening...omg! imagine ur bro eavesdropping on sex! But besides that it was really good! I also loved it! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute... really cute. Loved the Omake at the end. Thanks for the great read.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good! So totally enjoyed it. The whole embarassment and hesitation was cute ^^ It'd be REALLY cute if you wrote a sequel and we got to see some babies! lol. Anyways... this was good. Though the bet thing sounds kinda far-fetched, it's not TOO out of range. I'd like to read more from ya! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Twilight On: February 05, 2003 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooooo great , you should really write a sequel... |
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