| "The Master Becomes the Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: November 09, 2003 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to appologize for the former bad comments, I just get impatient, heh heh heh. Anyways, great work, and keep it up. I understand complications come up, and it's really undesireable to work them out when you don't like the fic that they belong to, but it is a good fic, so, please try. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Title: tatoosh
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. I'm glad you updated. I like the complicated relationship between the two, and Vegeta's conflicts.
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Reviewed By: tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 13:58 CDT
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Thank you for updating I'm really enjoying this story. I like the complicated play of desire, denial, confusion, and loneliness between the two.
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Reviewed By: Ginia On: September 13, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... looks like a good haul of reviews... is it enough for another chapter? I hope so but just in case, here is another one.
This 'council' seems to have everyone in fear of it - yet what could they do against Vegeta? He is powerful without a doubt - but no one is invincible... and there's probably a reason the council is feared. Vegeta seems to enjoy his private estate even if it had been a bit lonely before Goku arrived on scene - so I doubt he'd simply leave the planet if he were pressured...
Write more soon - We need to know what is happening! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *it wont let me log in! Grrr* On: September 09, 2003 04:54 CDT
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Well here's your review!! Please update soon! I wanna know what happens!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: White Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style of writing. Your story has caught my interest because I really enjoyed it. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 17:01 CDT
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*glances at all the reviews for this chapter* Hmm, do you even need this review? Ha, ha. Glad to see Kakarot figure out how to blast those nasties off him. ^__^ I liked it when he was checking Jita out, too. Ha, I could just see him walking around like nothing's out of place. erections are perfectly natural Ha ha ha! |
Reviewed By: bite-me On: September 04, 2003 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ur fic is very good so far!! update it soon and add more v/g(k) fluff in it ^_^ im hoping theres gunna b a lemon wit goku+vegeta?? let us kno soon! :) |
Reviewed By: LoserGirl On: September 04, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG please update!! i love ur fic so far and i need to read more! O.O update it soon!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: candy00 On: September 04, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story! I luv the setting and characters. PLEASE write again soon, I NEED to know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: yayayayayayayaya On: September 04, 2003 03:19 CDT
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amazing....... do more! more! more! |
Reviewed By: vegetaslillady On: September 04, 2003 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it so much......i love their personalities!! please update!!!!!!!! |
Title: tatoosh
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 18:00 CDT
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Good chapter but it leaves one with more questions than answers. I look forward to the rest.
How much trouble will fall on them and what will prevent Vegeta from just leveling the planet as he is so capable of doing if they try his patience? |
Title: For Me???
Reviewed By: Lullaby On: September 03, 2003 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! This is Emmy! ^_^ OOOOH Thank you SOOO much! I'm sooooo happy ^_^ I'll write a fic just for you! Tell me and who and I'll write it just for you! my mail is kinkaya06@hotmail.com!
Babye :) *Went away singing* |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 04:59 CDT
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I'm enjoying this fic, I want to know how things will progress. The title and the promise of yaoi have my attention. I like the way you are writing Vegeta and Goku. I also enjoy The Saiyan Companion. |
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