| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (ish too lazy too log in) On: October 02, 2003 15:15 EDT
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Uh oh. They must be heading toward Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 09:51 EDT
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Oh, good heavens. I have been following this story or so long, and I can't wait for the next chapter. *whines* I've been so patient, too! Please, please, reward this good little puppy with a treat! *ahem* Sorry about that. I keep rereading this, though. I can't get over how enjoyable it is. But I've starting to get itchy for the next chapter, so, *makes 'come' motions with hands* anytime now, okay? Anytime. Please. *big Shippou eyes* Please?
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Reviewed By: jazzylady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I really like this fic. That was really sweet of Jaken at the end. Also, when will Kagome ever remember about the past?
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!! awesome story so far! i'm so glad your not making shessy and kagome fall in love really quick! i also like the fact that you didn't make kag a complete heroine in distress! lol!!! but i do have one question... will you have a happy ending for this story?
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: September 27, 2003 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
q()p where's my new chapter? I thought you posted another chappie up? Wah... nothing's here! Update! Quick! Hurry! Pronto! Immediately! RIGHT NOW! pretty please?
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: September 25, 2003 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story , it;s diferent than others. please update soon!! it's been a while!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FanFic Addict On: September 07, 2003 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the whole story and I really hope that you haven't stopped writing it! I love this story! So PLEASE, PLEASE continue!
FanFic addict,
K.T. |
Reviewed By: Katt On: July 28, 2003 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the way this story is written. It's so funny! I am also a fan of Sess/Kag fics so this story is perfect for me. I can't wait to read what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: July 23, 2003 10:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story please write more update |
Reviewed By: Raven39 On: July 21, 2003 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is a good fic. Here is the line that I about rolled out of the chair laughing so hard:
"He probably had always been like this, she thought, oblivious to his anger. In her mind's eye, she saw a tiny Sesshoumaru rise from his bassinette, pluck a soother from his mouth, and coolly state, `This plaything bores me. Remove it from my presence.'"
What a visual!
Keep up the good work.
Raven39 |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: July 15, 2003 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very nice! I think you just became another of my favourite authors! (there's only 3 so far, considering I've read ... well ... I really cant keep track but let's just say A LOT of fics...)
Your writing style is very cute, and the sense of humor? I duno, I love your comments, and with that Keiko fireworks display I almost fall off my chair laughing XD (oh, and did you know, the other 2 fav authors are a pair .. they write together so they can be counted as one ...)
I really love your writing!
Update soon and Good Luck writing!
*also very nice plot!!! (been a while since I've read a sesshe/kagome fic with a nice plot, they have plots ... just that .. seems too lemon dominated...) |
Reviewed By: Niki On: July 12, 2003 22:24 EDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It's Updated!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's so great... I go away on vacation, and when I come back I get this!!!! Yay!!!!! Okay, now to the actual review..... I absolutely love this chapter!!!! Incredibly long, but that just makes it all the better....Man, always new that Sesshoumaru was straight foward but jeez....^^;; well, can't wait till the next chapter is out (and of course the one after that now that Naraku is making a move) so, keep up the good work!!!! |
Reviewed By: Chihiro Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 15:38 EDT
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You know I love it.
Please wirte more, |
Reviewed By: Aya_Nekono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 23:00 EDT
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God that was a long chapter! Good, but horribly long!!! ^-^ Keep writing!
Laterz!
~*Aya*~ |
Reviewed By: sistergaia On: July 10, 2003 05:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! I can't wait to read more. One of the better stories I've read in a while, even compaired to some published works. |
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