| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I enjoy reading this story over and over again, however I was wondering if you would updae. it's been 3 years since the last update. i hope that you do update soon i know how busy life can get. wel i'll talk to you later. hope that i see you soon.
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Reviewed By: Shadowdestiney_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 05:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i love your writing style its completely hilariose(sorry I cant spell)but it never takes away from the storey and jumping back and forth between presnt and past makes it more interesting so you cant get bored hope you update soon!! its really hard to find a fanfiction thats original and well written and its easy to keep up with 2 anyway i love and again update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 23:42 EST
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I've been following your story for over one year now. I'm still waiting for you to continue this wonderfully written story. Please update soon and I'll do the same...
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Title: This Mess We're In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 10:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, I have truly enjoyed this story and I hope that you haven't given up on finishing it! I know it's been nearly a year since it was last updated and I hope that in all this time another great chapter is being typed up and that soon it will be posted in an update. This is a very well written and not once was I confused in the shifts of time. Which some stories tend to do. I love the humor (which while reading several chapters last night, I nearly woke my husband trying not to bust a gut from my laughs! lol). I hated to see that I was getting close the final chapter posted and I kept taking my time reading because I knew it wasn't finished yet. So I hope that sometime soon another great chapter will be posted! Excellent work!!!
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Title: sessy love
Reviewed By: claudia g ( clawdia) On: September 29, 2005 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bloody hell this is great. I see you are writing other fics and it has been over a year since you updated this one. I been following it since day one. PLEASE update this. I find it one of the best i ever read. clawdia
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Title: So depresssed
Reviewed By: (himeg) On: September 24, 2005 15:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutley perfect I love it. I am just going to have to get over it though. You did not update very frequently in the past and since it has almost been two years since you last updated I am not really expection another chapter to come along. However that does not mean that you do not deserve praise for you excellent work. ***** FIve stars of course.
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Title: Ch 1 - 11
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 21:20 EDT
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it's about time for another chapter, me thinks. I laughed so hard at the way you phrase things. I like you ^_^ please write more!
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Title: abheff
Reviewed By: abheff29 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 03:27 EDT
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I really like this fic!!! I like the back and forth thing and surprisingly enough I can keep up with it. Keep up the great work!! By the way, I love the humor in your fic, can't wait until you update again.
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Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 00:17 EDT
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That is the funniest chapter I have read in a long time. So LOL! I loved the bit when Sesshoumaru is stomping all over Inuyasha! That was SO funny! And the stuff with Rin and Jaken! Love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Nistha On: June 08, 2005 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...it took me a few chapters to get the whole two story thing, but it is genius! I love the way each character is...characterized! This is one of my all-time favorite stories. It is sad, knowing that the Kagome, who interacts with Sesshou, doesn't remember her relationship with Sesshoumaru of the past and somehow, something happened to the two lovers of the past. Sesshoumaru must have died somehow and reincarnated into a human, since he remembers his birthday and all. And then there is the factor of Kagome and Sesshou's birthday being on the same day. The past individuals love each other so much and knowing this future Sesshou lets us comprehend that something bad happened in Sengoku Jidai, giving it a doomed-sexy feel to it...like I believe you were aiming for using PJ Harvey's song, "This Mess We're In" as an inspiration. The pieces fit together so perfectly. This story...I can't even describe it...is wonderful. I hope it isn't discontinued...please update when you can. ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarulover0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this fan fic is one of the best ones yet. I have to say that, being a writer myself, has brought me to review many of the stories I read. Unfortently, many of these are bad reviews. Your story has kept me on the edge of my seat. The plot was great! Even the discriptive sex scene with Sesshoumaru and Kagome. The two in one story thing was also a great touch. Sesshou is one of my favorite characters in this story. I hope your not discourage to write anymore since it has been a year since you last updated your story. Please, I would like to see this story finished and if you keep going at it, you might become a writer just like I am. With total respect, Alissa Ciampa
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Reviewed By: falconswing14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Well, I saw this story on a bunch of other author's lists of recommendations, but I never really bothered because (no offense) the summary isn't so great. But then I did read it, and was completely blown away! It was much better than expected, and you have found a dedicated reader in me! I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: questofdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ This is such an awesome story...why did you stop writing? I'm sure you have your reasons, but just so you know (in case your 100+ reviews haven't told you so, haha) that your amazing story-telling is darned addicting XD so I hope that one of these days...you will come back and pick this story back up ^^
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Title: This Mess We're In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 23:07 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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