| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin On: March 18, 2004 20:00 EST
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goddamn! it took me a week to read this chapter! everytime i start reading it and really start getting into it something happens! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn this is a long chapter!...I like it a lot....the lemon was great too...
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Title: YELLYYELLALOT@AOL.COM
Reviewed By: YELLY On: March 17, 2004 22:57 EST
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I LOVE THIS FIC THANKS FOR UPDATING IM A LITTLE COMFUSED ABOUT THE PLOT LINE THAT IS IN THE FUTURE THERE ARE STILL 2 PLOTS RIGHT ONNE IS WHERE IT SORT OF EXPLIANS WHY SHE CAN'T REMEMBER ALOT OF WHAT SHE WENT THROOUGHT IN HIGH SCHOOL AND THE OTHER IS WHEN SHE IS THE FUTURE AND MEETS SESSHOU AND WHAT THE HELL IS THIS THAT SOTA IS SESSHOUMARU OR SOMETHING PLEASE E-MAIL ME SOME RESPONSES
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: claudia67g [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best chapter EVER!!! This is a great chapter, it was well worth the wait!!!!! I LOVE this chapter... i hope you update soon and let it be just a juicy!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:02 EST
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ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY VOLPA-KAMI!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH FOR MERE WORDS TO EXPRESS!!!! You are probably the most thoughtful author I have ever read a story from. I mean, you have impecable taste in music (I love Sometimes!), you have enough skill to combine two different times, you write PERFECT battle scenes, and you know just how to balance sadness, anger, the urge to fight, happiness, and lust. You, my dear, are comparable to the Fates themselves (or what ever being created/thought the idea of writing) I salute you!
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Title: *Delighted Squeak!*
Reviewed By: The one and only... Ookami *snickers and winks* On: March 17, 2004 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chuckles and glomps* Dude, that was fabulous! Your writing just gets better and better every time you come up with a new chapter and I'm terribly impressed. It was sad, poignant, sweet, sexy, cute, silly... a whole massive jumble of beautifully portrayed emotions and interactions. You know I love how very clear your descriptions are and that you balance your structure and writing to a point where it's not too much or too little. Don't worry about the hopelessly AU thing either, hon, you've got a great thing going with your idea here so don't get too caught up in other things. ^__~ As always, if you need anything, drop me a line. Other than that, I shall be waiting eagerly for your next installment. *blows kisses and waves*
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Reviewed By: heninu11 On: March 17, 2004 12:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i am soo glad u updated it has been soo long sinnce you last did i thought you weren't going to. This is my alltime faverite story of all the ones that i have read. So please up date soon. This story is too good.
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Reviewed By: Flying_dragon On: March 17, 2004 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good that u didnt abondon the fic and updated it :) im not surprised it took so long, must have taken u 4ever 2 write the new chappie, maybe two weeks or so nonstop! keep up da good work and ill b waitin for the next chappie!
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Title: the best
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 06:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is still the best i have ever read it's totally awsome and i'm loving it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Blazed On: March 17, 2004 05:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're amazing and I absolutely love you! Seriously, the story is one of the best fanfictions that I've ever read and definetly the best Inuyasha. It's even worth the INCREDIBLY long wait for each chapter...but seriously, keep writing,because it only keeps getting better...
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Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 03:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::jumping around room and making a complete ass of herself:: Yay! You updated! And it was SOO worth the wait too! I absolutely love the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. And I'm loving Kikyo's personality. You've done a wonderful job with her. I hope everyone will come to accept her, but i understand that it will be difficult for them. But hey, if Kagome sees the good in her, then everyone else will follow! Anyways, wonderful chapter. I'll be waiting for the next one! Ja Lilli
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Reviewed By: Slice On: March 17, 2004 03:07 EST
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I love you, most of all I love your story (which is like, actually an extension of yourself isn't it?) it makes me feel all these different bubbly emotions and my eyes teared up with Aya (and her miko power went to Kikyou didn't it? That's why she's alive now in'it?) and I laugh hysterically at all those dialougues! *giggle* It's all so incredibly funny, really! ^___^ Love you. *smooch* I think I can manage all these long waits when reading something as amazing as this is the prize ^.^ Just so long as you keep writing it and updating it though, otherwise..I'll eat you. Mmmhhmm. Munch munch. *grin* I love your Kagome here by the way. She's wonderful. And Seshoumaru *swoon* ^.^ You make them so real and beautiful and in a way that I just want to eat them up! ^___^ Love you! Can't wait for the next update!! *smoochies* Love, Slice
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Reviewed By: Massao na Mizu On: March 16, 2004 07:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! :) I really appreciate the fact that you take time to email us with your updates! I have you in author alert and I try to read the two versions. ^_^ this is a very very good chap! :) though I'm not much gifted to criticize and point out what my fave parts are (i liked the whole thing!) i feel that i must give you perfect rating! ^_^ I'll read the ff.net version when i find time. i'm having my exams right now, eh. hehehe. :D it's okay nto to update for a long while! the long chap makes up for it anyway! :)
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 13:04 EST
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Ohohohohoho I can't WAIT for the next chapter! I've been going to the website weekly to check out the progress. You are SUCH a great writer!
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Reviewed By: kccranfield On: January 07, 2004 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating. I love this story. I am waiting patiently for the next installment.
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