| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~*jessica*~ On: May 23, 2004 21:27 EDT
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update! update! update! update! cummon! i've been waitin 4 2 long months!!! *sigh* newayz u have a fantastic story/plot...o i mite as well say dat woopz...i'm talking in slang...oh I'm too lazy to delete it but great story so far!!!
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Title: Witty, engaging, and funny as hell
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"He was also quite positive that his immense canine form wouldn't be greeted with joy and welcome by city authorities. He'd probably be shot in the butt with hundreds of tranquilizer darts, he thought sardonically. He wasn't sure whether he, or the animal control agency, would be more stunned." I found your story on the list of Inuyasha Fanguild Nominations for best stories of the quarter, and you richly, richly deserve the nomination for this story. Oh. My. God. It's 1am, I've been compulsively reading for hours and laughing my ass off at the insanely clever dialogue. I'm usually opposed to Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairings, but by gum, you're pulling it off magnficently. And you're telling a damned fine story. I'm so envious of your writing talent! And eagerly looking forward to future chapters! Thanks for sharing this with us--it's one of the freshest and funniest and most engaging stories that I've read in a long time.
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Reviewed By: Silvering [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! ^_^ Separating the timelines into separate chapters is a good call; keeps it from getting confusing. I love the long chapters! Please keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: jc On: May 06, 2004 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the plot, good use of emotions but sess in the past is a bit OCC, you HAVE too tell me more about what's happening in the future! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: yukilover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 05:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Impressive!! You are doing so well with the past/present storylines!!! Normally, stories involving past/present are extremely hard to follow!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: soulfire220 On: April 30, 2004 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most incredible stories I've found out there, your style is incredible and extremely powerful!I can't wait for your next installment. I'm quite egar to find out what Sess's reaction to Koga will be? Will our sexy little inu get jealous? By the way, of all of the fic's I've read, Ive never found anyone to first off setup such a good love scene, and more over adequetly describe the raw emotion and reality of making love for the first time. It was very...nostalgic. Anyways, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed your story. ps, if you ever need a beta reader...
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Title: What a glorious mess it is
Reviewed By: ice princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You cannot even begin to understand what I think of this fic. Your ability to simultaneously combine scathing humor with gory horror and stiff-lipped romance is extraordinary. And you do it all with such nonchalant ablomb. Your characterizations are believable and rich. I find the threading of the two plots easy to follow and mysterious...why has Sess reincarnated in her time (even though technically he hasn't really reincarnated, I'm guessing...) and why does Kagome have no memories? While anguish is promised in future chapters, the unique twisting of the plot also promises gratifying respite. I love this story, and how Sess and Kagome's relationship progresses. I am officially addicted, and you know what, it's not even just the complexity and originality of your idea. Your writing style is honest and perfectly timed, and your sarcastic wit has me snorting like a madwoman in front of my computer. Your double entendres (too many to count!!) make me split my sides! Simply put, I am in love with your fic (and of course, the hot main male character) and eagerly wait for more. Fantastic job.
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 15, 2004 21:37 EDT
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btw do sess and rin die? can she go through the well again? r u gonna pair san/mir?
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 15, 2004 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE this story, i like how you make kikyo good, but how is she alive?
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction of Sesshomaru/Kagome. Hope you put him with Kikyou.
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Reviewed By: Jean/Klopez717 On: March 29, 2004 20:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. I loved reading it, and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz plz and pretty plz update soon I love this story. I do hope that Sessy and Kagome stay together and I hope also in the future (kagome's time)that he and her get together. plz plz plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: wynter h On: March 25, 2004 07:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the way you put sess and kag togethere in the last chap. love the story line with the seporate time lines and how sess and kag act differently around each other. i enjoyed reading it, the best inu-yasha story i have ever read. i would so enjoy an updated soon wait slash that i can't wait unit it's finished. LOVED the other caractors you add in, and not making hojo a total geek. some points had laughs and some tears, good mixture. over all i loved reading it and hope there would be an update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_angel On: March 23, 2004 16:19 EST
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I really enjoy the story you wrote. The sytle and story line is amazing. Just a thought though, is the story finished or are you going to end it like that cuz if you do, it's pretty lame. If not, hope you continue to finish the story soon.
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 00:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that this fiction is still alive!! Thanks for updating, it was a fabulous chapter!!
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