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Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: August 09, 2004 13:03 CDT
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as a fanfic writer i know how hard it is too update quickly and all but...i thought you were going to try to update every two weeks. i mean i know thats a hard thing to do but its been over a year and all....
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Reviewed By: sweet roses On: July 29, 2003 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd, Update soon please... I really need to read more of this story, I love it. It's the one I'm ready practically, hurry up and update... pretty please? |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: July 26, 2003 18:56 CDT
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when r u gonna update already???? its been MONTHS!! need...more...STORY!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitsu On: July 25, 2003 07:32 CDT
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When are you going to update this damn thing?! Bloody friggin hell! You've been lettin it set here long enough! Get off of your rear end and post the next chapter you lazy, lazy person you! How could you be so unkind as to leave me and many others susspened after that last chappy?! It's simply inhuman! *glares and points at the author person* eeeviiilllll.....*eye twitches* |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH THE INHUMANITY OF IT ALL!! PLZ! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!! IM GOING THROUGH WITHDRAW!!!
*eye starts twitching*
MORE.... MUST HAVE MORE!!!
*goes stark-raving-mad*
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: July 02, 2003 05:43 CDT
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when r u gonna update?!?!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vicious. I don't know. Should I put down a "2" on enjoyment since it was more a painful angsty read, even if I mean that in a good way? And, well, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT??? The sick thing is that I can completely see Duo being the kind of give-give-give cheerful soul that would be easily used and misinterpreted by folks around him who'd just use abuse etc. So, in that sense, while I prefer the happy-go-lucky Duo, I can completely see this being the end result after the dust settles.
That said, I'm not sure I get where everyone else is coming from. My theory's that you're tackling the unreliable narrator (and not just that it's late and I misread), which kudos to you. It's a difficult and complex way to do things, making the reader doubt every line. But I still want to know what happens next, even if I'm partial to Heero/Duo combos, I don't know how *anyone* could possibly come out of this story in one piece, let alone HAPPY. I mean, really. Sheesh. Angst!
Oh, and the last two chapters may need to be reuploaded. There's a bunch of coding inserts, as though something got messed up while it was being uploaded. Author ID in brackets and whatnot - it didn't appear to do more than interrupt the flow but didn't cover up any of the story (if that makes sense - it IS late).
Once again, excellent if vicious read. |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga On: June 09, 2003 04:39 CDT
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*peels eyes off the screen with a spatula* OMG!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! I HAVE TOO!! EMAIL ME AT inga_maximus@yahoo.com WHEN YOU UPDATE!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I missed the update! Ah, well it was good. I can only hope I'll be able to catch the next one... |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 10:52 CDT
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Wow. Each chapter really makes me feel the characters' pain.
Duo's regret, his bitter appraisal of all the pilots (except Quatre), and his attempt to find temporary solace or escape in a bar once again spoke volumes of his pain.
I just loved Heero's reaction to Duo's telling him that he was just a quick lay. It's nice to see that Heero is capable of greater depth at times, too - even if he struggles with it himself. That scene made my eyes a bit watery!
Even when Duo is bitter about his "friends" - it's obvious he understands them all too well.
I do certainly look forward to the next update, as always! |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing such an great job with this story, sorry but I can't help but hope Heero changes and wins Duo. Your writing makes me feel the suffering Duo is going thru. I really hope it works out well in the end. Will watch for more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Falling Fire On: April 15, 2003 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really I don't have an explanation for my ratings, but this is a really awesome fic! You must keep up the wonderful work! *huggles* Thanks for giving me so many happy but suspenseful hours reading!!
Ja ne
~Ni-chan |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:34 CDT
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That was absolutely gut wrenching. I could NOT stop crying when I read the part where Duo got what he wanted...sort of...and yet forgot why he was doing it.
Yes, a bastardized Duo, but my gosh, he really does love Quatre. And love brings out both the best and worst in us...possibly more so than revenge.
Just from this one chapter alone, I kinda would love to see Duo and Quatre together, although I suppose it may be rather unrealistic. But my heart pines for Duo's happiness, and if despite everything that happened with everyone else...for Quatre's as well.
Man, the lump in my throat hasn't died down yet. The emotions stirred in Duo have really affected me, showing that you did a helluva job with that scene.
Wonderfully written. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the type of story that makes you sigh at the mere complexity of it. -big sigh- I'm glad Duo grew back some of his compassion. I can only wonder how this will end. |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: April 06, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome story. id write ore but i put nailpolish on. i think its dry but still... i want duox heero or wufei !!! lol i wish duo could just coe out and say everything or run away from them all. make them see what theyve done!!! |
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