"Abuse This" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Evil Inga On: June 09, 2003 04:39 CDT Comment/Review: *peels eyes off the screen with a spatula* OMG!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! I HAVE TOO!! EMAIL ME AT inga_maximus@yahoo.com WHEN YOU UPDATE!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 12:14 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I missed the update! Ah, well it was good. I can only hope I'll be able to catch the next one... |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 10:52 CDT Comment/Review: Wow. Each chapter really makes me feel the characters' pain.
Duo's regret, his bitter appraisal of all the pilots (except Quatre), and his attempt to find temporary solace or escape in a bar once again spoke volumes of his pain.
I just loved Heero's reaction to Duo's telling him that he was just a quick lay. It's nice to see that Heero is capable of greater depth at times, too - even if he struggles with it himself. That scene made my eyes a bit watery!
Even when Duo is bitter about his "friends" - it's obvious he understands them all too well.
I do certainly look forward to the next update, as always! |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 17:33 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You are doing such an great job with this story, sorry but I can't help but hope Heero changes and wins Duo. Your writing makes me feel the suffering Duo is going thru. I really hope it works out well in the end. Will watch for more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Falling Fire On: April 15, 2003 16:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really I don't have an explanation for my ratings, but this is a really awesome fic! You must keep up the wonderful work! *huggles* Thanks for giving me so many happy but suspenseful hours reading!!
Ja ne
~Ni-chan |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:34 CDT Comment/Review: That was absolutely gut wrenching. I could NOT stop crying when I read the part where Duo got what he wanted...sort of...and yet forgot why he was doing it.
Yes, a bastardized Duo, but my gosh, he really does love Quatre. And love brings out both the best and worst in us...possibly more so than revenge.
Just from this one chapter alone, I kinda would love to see Duo and Quatre together, although I suppose it may be rather unrealistic. But my heart pines for Duo's happiness, and if despite everything that happened with everyone else...for Quatre's as well.
Man, the lump in my throat hasn't died down yet. The emotions stirred in Duo have really affected me, showing that you did a helluva job with that scene.
Wonderfully written. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 22:43 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the type of story that makes you sigh at the mere complexity of it. -big sigh- I'm glad Duo grew back some of his compassion. I can only wonder how this will end. |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: April 06, 2003 20:47 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is an awsome story. id write ore but i put nailpolish on. i think its dry but still... i want duox heero or wufei !!! lol i wish duo could just coe out and say everything or run away from them all. make them see what theyve done!!! |
Reviewed By: Solain Rhyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 15:53 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another update!! And a damn good one at that. Eagerly awaiting the rest of this fantastic story..... |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 12:52 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, Just when I had given up you come up with another chapter and is it great. Hope you won't wait so long for the next one. I'll be waiting. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 22:01 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!! That WAS bastardous!!! LOL!!! I loved it! The angst was real, and I felt it all. I can't say I really blame Duo though. It may seem unfair now, but if you think back to all the shit they did to him, I say it's pretty fair. Why not put them in life threatening danger? They were in it everyday of their war lives. Duo can do it just once. No one'll get hurt. Lol. Can't wait for the next chap!!! |
Reviewed By: darkk_angel On: March 17, 2003 17:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this is the absolute best fanfic that I have ever had the pleasure of reading... Man, the ending was great! Hell, the whole story was great! You have an amazing way of conveighing (pardon my spelling) the ideas that go through Duo's head. The story was a tad bit depressing, mind you... But what the hell, I'd give it 100 out of 10 if there was such a rating. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 21:29 CST Comment/Review: It wasn't as bad as I thought from your intro. I feel absolutely awful that Duo feels the need to resort to this. I'm glad Quatre believes him...I think that, despite his lies, he needs to know that someone does.
Hell, Heero and Wufei believe him, too.
My heart bleeds for Duo in this story. I know that it may ruin the entire mood of the story, but I hope that, if things don't end happily ever after (and do they ever, really?) that at least people find acceptance.
I loved Heero's answer to Duo, much more so than Wufei's. His statement that he needed Duo, and not knowing more than that...it actually got to me! That and Duo's real tears during the whole thing.
It's a powerfully written story, heart wrenching to say the least, and I find myself almost on the verge of tears at times.
Well, again, I hope that things end, if not happily, then at least they end well. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 16:06 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn....That was intense. The part where Trowa confronted Duo just made me sick. What the *%^#$* did Trowa think he was doing?!! Duo need to run away, and just...I dunno isolate himself. They can't keep him there!!! This is effing abuse!! You got me all pent up now! -screams- I - I can't even think straight anymore. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Solain Rhyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 17:17 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Once again, well worth the wait. I look forward to the rest. |
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