| "The Choice of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
Reviewed By: MeefMonster Rides Again! On: October 12, 2006 22:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
My SigO and i are lovking it!! So Jimmy dont like gay play hmm...how about bondage?????mwahahahah sticks and stones may break my bones but whips and chains excite me!!!
|
Title: please
Reviewed By: Shinigami_Angel On: September 25, 2006 23:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
i reaaaallllly think you need to update!!!!! because you love me??? lol well anyways please dont let this become one of those half finished stories that are really great but never finished
|
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ^^ beautiful! I greatly enjoyed that, and look forward to it being continued *-^ your word choice and descriptions are amaizing, and the plot flows so nicely... from one nerely solved problem to another problem and the problems don't seem so close together that they blend or too far from each other that they each feel like different stories. This feels rather professional (though I'm not sure about the grammar.... ^^; ), I bet you're in our beyond colege and a profesional at that ^^ beautiful story, great word choices, wonderful paragraph and sentance structure... and a terrific plot! ^-^ good ness ^^ I don't generaly give out an over all 10... actualy, this is the 1st one I've ever given ^^; like I said, I'm looking forward to the next chapter *-^
|
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 02:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
DAMNIT GET TO THE LEMON ALREADY!!!! Shit, shouldn't have said that. Oh well, you've written something quite different thus far, and it is impressive. But in all seriousness, GET ON TO THE HEERO ON DUO ACTION ALREADY!!! You know everyone wants that heavy hot guy on guy sex that you've hinted on oh so well thus far. So please, go all the way (and sorry for being an ass, but seriously, WE WANT TO SEE A LEMON ALREADY!!! Still being an ass, but you've done EVERYTHING in this story well thus far, including the foreplay. So please get to the good stuff, thanks). Anyway, this is a very different story, and makes for good reading. Please continue.
|
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 00:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
well im just gnna start bugging you now for good measure ^_^ awesome job! i luv this! cant wait fore MORE *hint hint*
|
Reviewed By: *~Kia~* On: August 25, 2006 17:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
yay! ::happiness:: and heeros finally gonna get him some ^_^ lol sux what happened to Une though yeah so I wont be bugging you to update for another two weeks
|
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 09:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
I glad Noin didn't tell her anything, Doro is annoyiing as hell. I was surprised that Heero didn't want to believe Duo when he told him that his brother was in the med wing, I mean that would having going over to find out why my bro was over there and why Duo had been over there for most of the night. Shoot especially if it had Duo come to him personally in the 'morning' of all times to tell him so. Update soon!
|
Reviewed By: *~Kia~* On: July 27, 2006 00:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yay I'm so happy you updated and so soon after. It was good and I need to know whats gonna happen to poor Quatre and Wufei for that matter
|
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: July 26, 2006 11:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
You need to upadet more often- it's too good to wait for! : )
|
Title: The choice of death
Reviewed By: Rdoujima On: July 07, 2006 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic I was so happy when yo updated and hope you update again soon like I said I really love your fic.
|
Reviewed By: chimeara009 On: July 02, 2006 19:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow please update!! a really good story!! cant wait till next entry!
|
Reviewed By: priscel _ =^_^= On: July 01, 2006 21:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wahoo! an update! I missed this story, spelling has improved. *smiles* I hadn't expected Duo to slap heero. I hope Trowa gets Quat to a healer soon. *huggles you guys* glad you update
|
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 00:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
that was extremly exciting to read...i hope you post a new chapter by at least a month because i dont think i can handle another cliffhanger like the last one. X3 great job!
|
Title: The choice of death
Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 05:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the reason I gave you 9's is because you havn't updated. Other than that I like the fic Very much and hope you update soon. Roxy
|
Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: August 07, 2005 10:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better. I have been with this story since the first time it came out and I am loving the fact that it is getting completed. Maybe I will get the the block gone from my head and be able to complete my first fic as well.
|
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
