| "The Choice of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 17:31 EDT
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I really like your fic.please update soon.this chick likes this story because for once,heero and duo are fighting and playing hard to get.keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: July 09, 2004 14:02 EDT
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Ya the next part has come out. Can't wait till you up date again. Please up date soon the last time was way long.
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Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 10:02 EDT
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OH!! I read the other reviews after I wrote mine and I just had to add this. I agree very much with Kyra Chan about Wufei getting his voice back and maybe since we don't really know what Quatre is maybe he has a power or knows of a eay to heal Fei well just had to say that. Oh did I mention that this is a great fic so far (oh yeah I also agree with the whole Heero not beating Duo thing because there is no way duo would want Heero after that) please update soon :) Roxy
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Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic can't wait for the next update. Oh yeah I like Pain of Life too so it would be great to see an update there too. Can't wait!!! Roxy
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fan fic its real mid evil and I like that you have heero as king. I can't wait for the rest of this story. good job.
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Reviewed By: Corli On: September 11, 2003 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you depict Duo as such a strong character. I hope you continue with this, it's the best slave fic I've read. |
Reviewed By: Aquarius On: June 11, 2003 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please don't leave Wufei to that monster that would be inhumane and cruel to your readers
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Reviewed By: KaollaSu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Somehow I ended up reviewing even though I said I wouldn't. This fic seems slightly familiar. And I am kinda bored so you might see an update from me sometime during the week. ^_^ I'm not so evil after all. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: May 20, 2003 14:58 EDT
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I stumbled onto your fic and have to say I'm enjoying if very much. Poor Wufei, he's really got himself a horrible master in Treize. Hope Duo can somehow get Treize before Treize gets him. |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2003 02:41 EDT
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Yuy is showing promise and I genuinely like Zechs. Also very glad that you made Duo his proper strong self. He's got a backbone. He is the son of Death. All is as it should be. Now he just has to fall for that arrogant s.o.b. he refuses to call master. That should be intersting.
Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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At least, Heero isn't a total bastard.
Why did Zechs visit Duo, it's not like he said anything? |
Reviewed By: Airen On: May 15, 2003 20:15 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this. Thank you so much for separating the paragraphs...it's so much easier to read, yay. My only other nitpick involves verb tenses -- sometimes you switch to the present tense, but it really isn't that noticeable. Other than that...lovely, excellent fic! Please continue! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: sage kitty On: April 25, 2003 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way this story is going...please continue, i am most curious to how it will go... please. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heero is an arrogant bastard. Treize is a sadistic arrogant bastard. Trowa is really too caring. Zechs is into equality.
Everyone's totally OOC, but who cares, this fic is really good so far.
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 24, 2003 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP IT! I'm really enjoying this fic! The only thing I wish you'd do is cut to a new paragraph every time someone says something. It's very hard to read long conversations that are just one big long paragraph. It also turns a lot of readers off. That's it. Please continue...I love this! ^______^ |
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