| "The Choice of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Corli On: September 11, 2003 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you depict Duo as such a strong character. I hope you continue with this, it's the best slave fic I've read. |
Reviewed By: Aquarius On: June 11, 2003 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please don't leave Wufei to that monster that would be inhumane and cruel to your readers
=( |
Reviewed By: KaollaSu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Somehow I ended up reviewing even though I said I wouldn't. This fic seems slightly familiar. And I am kinda bored so you might see an update from me sometime during the week. ^_^ I'm not so evil after all. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: May 20, 2003 14:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
I stumbled onto your fic and have to say I'm enjoying if very much. Poor Wufei, he's really got himself a horrible master in Treize. Hope Duo can somehow get Treize before Treize gets him. |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2003 02:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yuy is showing promise and I genuinely like Zechs. Also very glad that you made Duo his proper strong self. He's got a backbone. He is the son of Death. All is as it should be. Now he just has to fall for that arrogant s.o.b. he refuses to call master. That should be intersting.
Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
At least, Heero isn't a total bastard.
Why did Zechs visit Duo, it's not like he said anything? |
Reviewed By: Airen On: May 15, 2003 20:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this. Thank you so much for separating the paragraphs...it's so much easier to read, yay. My only other nitpick involves verb tenses -- sometimes you switch to the present tense, but it really isn't that noticeable. Other than that...lovely, excellent fic! Please continue! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: sage kitty On: April 25, 2003 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way this story is going...please continue, i am most curious to how it will go... please. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heero is an arrogant bastard. Treize is a sadistic arrogant bastard. Trowa is really too caring. Zechs is into equality.
Everyone's totally OOC, but who cares, this fic is really good so far.
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 24, 2003 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP IT! I'm really enjoying this fic! The only thing I wish you'd do is cut to a new paragraph every time someone says something. It's very hard to read long conversations that are just one big long paragraph. It also turns a lot of readers off. That's it. Please continue...I love this! ^______^ |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2003 13:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
Keep the chapter. It is far too good to just toss out. And the character developments and such that it provided are too important to the our understanding of the story.
So Wu is a dragon, Duo is Deaths shadow/son..what is Quatre?
Yuy needs to be smacked around a bit. You had better not have him abuse Duo. I see you having a relationship develop between those two and that will not happen if he hits or otherwise abuses Duo. Or at least, it shouldn't. Maxwell is far too strong to fall for someone who has EVER hurt him.
Are you going to have Wu and Zechs get together at the end? And is it possible to give Wu back his voice?
Please write quickly and well and get the next chapter out! |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 13, 2003 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, I liked this. Slave fics rock, and this one is especially interesting, what with Duo being Death's shadow and all. Hopefully you'll update soon...because this is hella good. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: February 18, 2003 07:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's awesome! More,I want more!
But PLEASE, don't let Duo get raped.
I'm really tired of the fics, where boys, especialy Duo gets abused.
Please?
All in all you did it perfect! |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 15:03 EST
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE! I like it. Poor shinigami, seperated. *sigh* I love slave fics. ^^ It looks like it could be great. |
Reviewed By: Yaten On: February 16, 2003 21:20 EST
Comment/Review:
You should lower down a little bit on the author note at the begining. It take almost half the page.
Except for that, it seem promising. Keep Writing |
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