| "The Choice of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: NightCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 05:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good and I cannot wait to read more.Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: February 27, 2005 18:36 EST
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i was waiting for an update and i finally got to read it! haha.....still a good fic and i do have to say that i can't wait to read what happens next. i wonder what trowa and treize think about duo's punishment, or more importantly heero for that matter. update again soon!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 27, 2005 14:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Don't keep saying it sucks cause it doesn't. I happen to like it very much. It's good and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 16:32 EDT
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great chapter is all i have to say really i cant wait for the next one its a great fic oh and pane of life is a great fic too really sad has made me cry so far but thats just how good it is. it makes me emotional Choice of death too. well sorry for the rambling.
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Title: Does it really need a title?
Reviewed By: Magic_shield [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 11:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, all 10! I don't usually give those out! lol nice story!!!!!!! update soon please!
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Title: heres what got cut off *sweatdrop* sorry
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:17 EDT
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...assuming that it wasn't too long before the king had to remarry? or maybe she died when he was younger, but his mom, I feel would have been the source for Heero's negative views toward salvery. ok 'nuf said? *sweatdrop* update please!
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Title: sorry really long commentary *eeps* Don't kill me! *runs and hides*
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*groans* i can't believe that I have to wait to read more. I was reallly into the story *sniffs* now I have to suffer, but it's well worth the wait So please update again Soon! I really like this story ALOtalotalot, And please don't apologize for a long chapter, man it was well worth the read! I'm SOOO happy that heero didn't turn out to be a prick and rape Duo but traize-I dunno, I just hope that Duo isn't ever alone with him. Heero seems to be aware of the threat that Jerkoff is to Duo, but I can't help but fear that heero may lose sight of this threat during one of his fits of anger and give traize taht time alone with Duo that he's just itching for (i'm sure it wouldn't be an intentional thing on Heero's part but he may get there too late). Man where's duo's Pops!?! maybe its just that he can't find Duo in his human form, but surely he would know what his son would look like based on his mother's appearance and what he once looked like long ago before he shed his fleshy layer to dawn the bones that signify his very name...And yea!!! Heero, what changed him! what made his heart so cold that he would willing enslave another being and subject them to his whims (sexual or just the addiction of being dominant)?! I wonder if it is directly related to the death of his mother and later that of his father? Maybe a slave, a spy, killed them both. The first time may have been what caused him to change. I don't think it was said when exactly Heero's mother died but I'm assuming that |
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: July 11, 2004 02:13 EDT
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I enjoyed it a lot. please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Dona Devy On: July 10, 2004 12:44 EDT
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interesting. Very intersting indeed. I like the Shadow idea and all.
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Reviewed By: Sanam jan On: July 10, 2004 08:51 EDT
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I liked it very much tho' I don't know how you're going to make it work between Heero and Duo. Heero's attitude,so far, isn't exactly what could make Duo to fall for him . Well I'm curious to see what are you doing about it. I also find the chemistry between Zeches and Wufei somehow cute. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter and really hope you'll up date soon.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 17:31 EDT
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I really like your fic.please update soon.this chick likes this story because for once,heero and duo are fighting and playing hard to get.keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: July 09, 2004 14:02 EDT
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Ya the next part has come out. Can't wait till you up date again. Please up date soon the last time was way long.
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Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 10:02 EDT
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OH!! I read the other reviews after I wrote mine and I just had to add this. I agree very much with Kyra Chan about Wufei getting his voice back and maybe since we don't really know what Quatre is maybe he has a power or knows of a eay to heal Fei well just had to say that. Oh did I mention that this is a great fic so far (oh yeah I also agree with the whole Heero not beating Duo thing because there is no way duo would want Heero after that) please update soon :) Roxy
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Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic can't wait for the next update. Oh yeah I like Pain of Life too so it would be great to see an update there too. Can't wait!!! Roxy
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fan fic its real mid evil and I like that you have heero as king. I can't wait for the rest of this story. good job.
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