| "Welcome To Slavery" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaoru On: February 27, 2003 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
can yami be mean at first? it's no fun if he's nice... and ryou is so beautiful when he's hurt |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again, me likes! i want yami to be nice to ryou, but very kinky too XP. anywayz, hmm... yugi seems a bit to the side, but OOC-ness is to be expected... yami bakura's gonna come back into the story, rite? mabey make him a second slave some how? ^_^ that would be fun... ne wayz, keep goin! |
Reviewed By: Evil bunny On: February 26, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...yes, this is really good! I think you should make Yami nice to Ryou. By the way, I like your Marik/Yugi pairing(I don't know if you'll keep it that way, but I like it.) |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likes! more than 'Father, Mother, Lover'. hehhe. this is goodie so far! more more! ^_^ yay, another eygpt ficcy invlolving Yami's b-day! hehe ^_^ keep goin! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 25, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Your great! Love this! Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 15:39 CST
Comment/Review:
That's a pretty original idea, Ryou trying to protect Bakura. Keep up the good work. Umm.... You've got a rather large typo that's staring me in the face. The way you have it spelled, bizarre, means that something is strange. The word you meant was bazaar. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 08:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww! How sweet! it keeps on getting more interesting by the chappie!! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo!!!! yay, more! i like the fluff. |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
YEAHNESS!!! hmmm...Bakura should give in to Marik's demands...poor Bakura and Ryou. |
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