| "Welcome To Slavery" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ayan Kitsune On: December 04, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfics. Please please please make a sequel to this story.I LOVE Ryou/Yami Pairing I just wish more people would write stories with that pairing
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Reviewed By: Sand Pharaoh On: November 09, 2004 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful. simply beautiful. i felt the passion, the love the fear, everything.truly a diamond in the desert.
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, it was so fluffy sometimes! ^^ well, I absolutely love Yami/Ryou and I see that a lot in your stories! I love your ancient Egypt fics, and I know you wrote this over a year ago (rather, you finished it over a year ago O.O; ) but you could really make a sequel (I don't know if you have ^^')! You could do like what y ou did with the pharaoh's gift, like...make it in the present. Or, you could go ahead to what happens when the lady comes along to marry Yami. That'd be interesting, and I was wondering how that'd work out. Well, whatever you do I always enjoy your fics immensely. I haven't read all of them yet, but I'm working on it! ^^ Okay, so please update your other fics as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, it was so fluffy sometimes! ^^ well, I absolutely love Yami/Ryou and I see that a lot in your stories! I love your ancient Egypt fics, and I know you wrote this over a year ago (rather, you finished it over a year ago O.O; ) but you could really make a sequel (I don't know if you have ^^')! You could do like what you did with the pharaoh's gift, like...make it in the present. Or, you could go ahead to what happens when the lady comes along to marry Yami. That'd be interesting, and I was wondering how that'd work out. Well, whatever you do I always enjoy your fics immensely. I haven't read all of them yet, but I'm working on it! ^^ Okay, so please update your other fics as soon as you can!
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Title: Welcome To Slavery
Reviewed By: jeoykibeayami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
would you do a sequle to this!!!!!! this was great beacuse i like yami/ryou. but over all it was great.
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Amani Hershel On: March 25, 2004 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo! I have been reading your stories in the past week non stop unsent, Zanhi, Father Mother lover, Father Mother Lover II, you rocked my world, pharohs gift memories caught in the middle and buniess hours. Your writhing is unique and very insperatinal. I beg of you to make a sequal!
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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: foxumon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 01:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, so awesome =D It was like two happy endings in one, lol - gotta love that happy ending =D I just love how you ended it! He, he all a dream ^-^ yay!
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Reviewed By: lingling On: January 10, 2004 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome can u write a sequel
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Reviewed By: AnubisAngel On: August 14, 2003 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooooooh Ra NoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO! THEY'RE ABOUT TO ASSASSINATE MY POOR INNOCENT RYOU AND MY NOT-SO-POOR-AND-NOT-SO-INNOCENT-CUZ-OF-THE-ATTEMPT-OF-MURDURER BAKURA!!! *bursts into tears* do not let them! If they die I will go on hunger strike AND stop reading this evil story!!! LOL ^__^ geez u make these fics so stressing! geat story! KEEEEP WRITINGGGG! |
Reviewed By: AnubisAngel On: August 14, 2003 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooooooooooh *creepy music playz* DUN DUN DUNNNNN! what a cliffhanger! cool stuff man! although i must agree with 'the math equation genius'on 1 point: marik IS a sick perve! not because he's attracted to men, but because he rapes people! i mean ya, its ok if they feel 4 eachother but thats just wrong... very interessting fic! good job! keep writing!!! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: the math equation genius On: August 14, 2003 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
malik = so cool
marik = sick perve
yami = baka
ryou = cute but rather dumb
yami + ryou = the wrost couple in anime history
marik + bakura = dont_even_get_me_started_on_it_!
bakura = this fic = DA BOMB!
this is soooooo interesting plz continue |
Reviewed By: -SurprizeD-StarE- On: August 14, 2003 09:16 CDT
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S-S: *in his sing-song voice* if ryou'd only have a brain he'd choose his brother, if albino-man only had a brain he'd chose his bro... ha ha tomb-robber rulz, pharaoh droolz... |
Reviewed By: ................................................. On: August 14, 2003 08:59 CDT
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go malik! uhu! go malik! o ya! go malik! he rules! go malik! cuz he aint a wimp! go malik! uhu! go malik! cuz he actually haz a mind of hiz own! go malik! uhu! go malik! he hates kaiba! go malik! he rocks! go malik! O YA! gimme a D, an I, an E, a Y, an A, an M, an I! wat doz that spel? DIE YAMI!!! uhu! cuz he did things to poor-brainless-no-longer-so-innocent-ryou! O YA! |
Reviewed By: lunarsfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 00:37 CDT
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wow this was a great story. the ending was a good touch. |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Go for the Sequal! YEAH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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