| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: LS On: August 19, 2003 08:40 CDT
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Not bad, never thought of this couple. I guess it's nice to do new things... One question, why doesn't chapter 12 fully load? You might want to look into it. Anyho, nice writing as always. (This is one of the few romance/eritoc stoires I read with deadacation. Anyho, I'm now inspired to write my own fanfaction, as always happens when I read something good.
Note: I read some of your reviews... and I say to the flamers, I know it's a children's show, but everyone here is in character and the materal is handled with respect... That's what NC-17 means, this story is for adults. So flamers, shoo! |
Reviewed By: Xan vega ((too lazy to sign in)) On: August 19, 2003 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... as a one shot it could have been enjoyable if Sparkle wasn't the world's biggest bitch**must remember to have Sparkle killed in my rp later**. HE was just trying to express his adoration and she blew him totally off. Please get back to the story and send the AU/oneshots to a diff story. I was hope you were going to be serious about writing a series unlike my other favourites that butcher their stories once I get into it.
Sorry... Lackasleepitis is making me a bitch. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: August 10, 2003 02:25 CDT
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I hope that you will write the next chapter includes Human Threesome story. |
Reviewed By: Shiny Zapdos On: August 09, 2003 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its Hamtaro And Bijou All The Way! |
Reviewed By: SuperWarrior On: August 01, 2003 06:42 CDT
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I would like you to write about human threesome & what's next as well as Howdy & Hannah ficiton. |
Reviewed By: SuperWarrior On: August 01, 2003 06:12 CDT
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I would request for you to write human threesome & what happened next in the story next & what about Howdy & Hannah next? |
Reviewed By: super_skippy On: August 01, 2003 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is.. why little inoccent hamsters? |
Reviewed By: Shiny_Dustox On: July 31, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was great! Please, write more... |
Reviewed By: Tora-Hamu-Chan-Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, really good!!! tthe first hardcore Hamtaro lemon (that I've read) keep it up! what struck you to write this? |
Reviewed By: Orange Clown On: July 21, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have mixed feelings on some things. but I love this as a whole.
Ch.1: Short, not so well written, but I'm glad they got better.
Ch.2: Yay! Oxy+Pepper!
Ch.3: My only problems with this were the speed at which the relationship moved, and I would've liked Howdy to get Hannah, they go so well together.
Ch.4: I hate this couple like the plague, but you made it a pretty good chapter. I still liked it.
Ch.5: Not bad, it must've been fun making that chapter, since neither of them has had much personality development im the show.
Ch.6: Hahaha! Seems like something Maxwell would do. The best sex scene in the story as far as I'm concerned. 4 rounds...who knew Maxwell had it in him?
Ch.7: Hamtaro gets laid...
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ch.8: Woo! Snoozer gets some! My second favorite chapter. Snoozer seems like a good lover.
Ch.9: Lucky bastard...
Ch.10: So Panda likes kinky sex, Will and Kurica. Not sure who they are but nice job.
Ch.11: Incestuous Stan and Sandy, a rare couple... And after 4 chapters of waiting, Boss finally gets a mate, rather unfortunate slip of the tongue for him... Jesus..4 times last night and Maxwell STILL manages another in the morning...
I hope you continue this story, it's gotten pretty good since chapter 4. |
Reviewed By: Pashmina-Chan On: July 16, 2003 07:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is great! and it even has a plot! anyway continue soon |
Reviewed By: Saikono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
usually i think stories like these are not done properly. but, this one actually had a plot. and the plot is interesting. so, i say great work and keep it up! |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 08, 2003 12:34 CDT
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I thought the Laura and Travis pairing was good. Please more of those two! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: June 29, 2003 06:47 CDT
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What's the next story that you create? |
Reviewed By: CoolHam On: June 20, 2003 06:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like you to write more stories because I like your stories very much. |
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