"Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: none On: June 19, 2003 23:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: You are a disgusting pervert. Hamtaro is supposed to be a cute show not a porn flick. You got some serious issues pal!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: June 18, 2003 06:35 CDT Comment/Review: What's the next fiction that you going to write? |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 20:21 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: WTF?!?!?!?!?!??!?! What is the MATTER with you?! Have you gotten so desperately perverted that you have gotten Hamtaro into the mix?! You sai "Hilarious Outakes!" was bad! Look at yours!!! I know I'm being mean, but, come on!! Surely you can think of something a little more friendly?!
Mikey B23 out!!!!.............. |
Reviewed By: Ham-Ham OuTKasT On: June 15, 2003 01:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good work, the pairing between Stan and Sandy was a great addition. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: mcamino On: June 13, 2003 03:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OH MY GOD. I love your new chapter! This is the best fic i have read in a long time, although i am still a strong fan of mating season You are great. I love the way you jump between sences just as they get interesting just like a professional writer would. Good Work |
Reviewed By: GogetaSS7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 11:04 CDT Comment/Review: Who would write a lemon about hamsters?! That just shouldn't happen! |
Reviewed By: netaro On: June 11, 2003 06:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It is cool fanfic, but author should DO NOT use so much space between acapits. |
Reviewed By: Brodstern On: June 08, 2003 17:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! :D I like this fic. It has all my favorite Hamtaro couples. Hamtaro/Bijou, Laura/Travis, Oxnard/Pepper... I love the rest of this story's couples too. Great fic. Update! Ye must update soon before thy fic readers get mad! |
Reviewed By: - On: June 08, 2003 15:02 CDT Comment/Review: Egh... in chapter 11, I think you just killed my second favourite couple, and if there's stan-sandy (ew, already) then I would assume there is gonna be Pashmina-Maxewell? (I hate that idea almost as much as Boss-Bijou, almost)ah whatever! As long as Hamtaro or Bijou aren't put with any others I'm happy, after all that's the only couple I care about. Other than that, great fic! |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 07, 2003 11:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review: Thank you for your created story & do write somemore & I had one thing I had to say is that when it's chosen it will never change because Sandy fall in love with Stan for what I think is a
switch & it's not what I really want & Boss & Sparkle part was Awesome but Boss has chosen his mate like what I said was chosen, but please write
about putting back to chosen ones like Stan with Pashmina & Sandy with Maxwell, & that's what I really hope for in next story but please write something nice & erotic, Thank You! & Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 05, 2003 08:09 CDT Comment/Review: When will the next story be ready? |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 04, 2003 06:17 CDT Comment/Review: Next story I would like you to write about Boss & Sparkle erotic story. |
Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 15:02 CDT Comment/Review: O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O
Holy sh*t dude |
Reviewed By: FictionReader On: June 03, 2003 10:03 CDT Comment/Review: What's Next For Us? |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 27, 2003 08:03 CDT Comment/Review: Your stories are very nice,so please write more. |
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