| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 26, 2003 08:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope Boss & Sparkle story would be more erotic & nice. |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 24, 2003 09:22 CDT
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Is the next story ready? |
Reviewed By: jillian On: May 24, 2003 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 22, 2003 07:47 CDT
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What's next as well as Boss & Sparkle. |
Reviewed By: ahh...sweet love...... On: May 18, 2003 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I come here every day to see if youve written more, and have you? no! look, I know Im creepy, but.... YOURE WRITING IS MY LIFE!!!! Im sitting here right now, eating doritos and rereading all of the chapters Ive already read. I, mister author, am afraid this will have to get personal if you dont write more! if you dont write more......Ill kill myself....Heh heh, just kiddin, but I really am that dedicated, and being the computer retard i am, i dont think i can e-mail you, so i pray that you check you're reviews soon.
Your biggest fan |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 18, 2003 03:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wish that you write about Boss & Sparkle erotic story next would more erotic & nice. |
Reviewed By: Ahh, sweet love... On: May 17, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are SOOOOOOOOO awesome!! Your my hero! Write more is all I can say! PLEEEEAAASE write more,I've gotten to where I cant sleep at night! Whew, ok, to hyper, Sorry bout' that. You have really got a knack for the sexual writing. But... its hard to imagine hamsters with breasts... Forget I said that, it might mess up your writing. The story is flowing very nicely, and now I can't decide which is my favorite. I'm a VERY harsh reviewer, but I just cant say that there's anything wrong with it. From a fellow writer (a very good one at that) I am jealous of how you can combine sex with romance so well!(Cept'ch.9 o' coarse, but it was the kinkiest one!)
P.S. I've seen your reviews, and you need to be more harsh! Those losers are nothin' compared to you! |
Reviewed By: Ahh, sweet love... On: May 17, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are SOOOOOOOOO awesome!! Your my hero! Write more is all I can say! PLEEEEAAASE write more,I've gotten to where I cant sleep at night! Whew, ok, to hyper, Sorry bout' that. You have really got a knack for the sexual writing. But... its hard to imagine hamsters with breasts... Forget I said that, it might mess up your writing. The story is flowing very nicely, and now I can't decide which is my favorite. I'm a VERY harsh reviewer, but I just cant say that there's anything wrong with it. From a fellow writer (a very good one at that) I am jealous of how you can combine sex with romance so well!(Cept'ch.9 o' coarse, but it was the kinkiest one!)
P.S. I've seen your reviews, and you need to be more harsh! Those losers are nothin' compared to you! |
Reviewed By: Hirokiri__Batosai On: May 17, 2003 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you are excellent!!! I've never given anyone such a high score! You're my hero! Please keep putting your amazing talent to good use!
P.S. Be more harsh on your reviews. |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: May 15, 2003 08:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Make this story more erotic & enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: May 13, 2003 07:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write something nice about Boss & Sparkle erotic story. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: May 06, 2003 07:38 CDT
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Now I'm quite pleased with that story you created,but I need to say the next story be very nice & erotic, so pleased write a very nice story. |
Reviewed By: Mitsukai William On: May 05, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best chapter yet! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: May 04, 2003 06:46 CDT
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I would like you to write about Boss & Sparkle next & human threesome erotic story. |
Reviewed By: the old, wise, and wrinkly hamster On: May 02, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great!!! i must see more!! keep writing. cya
P.S. i am changing my name to moogle64 |
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