| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: NiceHam On: May 02, 2003 06:38 CDT
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I would wish that you would write about Boss & Sparkle as well as human threesome erotic story.
Thank You. |
Reviewed By: LS On: April 30, 2003 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantasmo! Or nice one. I think those four of from the first move, am I right? Lucky guy, at least for now. Anyho, I also saw the epsisode with Sparkle, so I now know who she is as well.
Again, nice story and kudois for the ummm... nevermind. |
Reviewed By: Spoiler IX On: April 28, 2003 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs to check his spelling better. And there are much more interesting ways to write a sexual scene that the porn industry basics. Scripted style is too hard to follow, interest gets lost easily. |
Reviewed By: Undercover Ham-Ham Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 10:46 CDT
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So far I am satisfied with so many people coming to read it! I would enjoy more comments and I am working on the next chapters, but you must be patient and NO comments on who to do next. I now have enough feedback and have decided the story's path, and I hope you enjoy! Please keep reading and give me feedback on how you like each chapter! Thank you!!! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: April 27, 2003 06:58 CDT
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What you think if you could write about Boss & Sparkle love & erotic story? It would be nice. |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: April 25, 2003 08:10 CDT
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Now this time is Boss & Sparkle turn in love & erotic story, this going to be nice |
Reviewed By: xan nova On: April 23, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe I loved this!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: April 22, 2003 07:35 CDT
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What about write human threesome & Boss & Cindy with love & erotic story, what do you think? |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: April 20, 2003 08:05 CDT
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Write Boss & Cindy with love & erotic story it would be nice. |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: April 20, 2003 07:59 CDT
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Write Boss & Cindy with love & erotic story it would be nice. |
Reviewed By: Cool Ham On: April 20, 2003 04:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write about Boss & Cindy erotic story |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: April 16, 2003 10:02 CDT
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I hope that I wrote the comment last time would be very nice, thank you. |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: August 06, 2003 12:23 CDT
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When are you going to continue this fic? |
Reviewed By: sexy ham On: April 13, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved ur fanfics there very romantic and sexy do write more can't wait!!;) |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: April 12, 2003 10:28 CDT
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What about Boss & Cindy who had love & erotic story next? |
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