| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cool Hamster On: April 10, 2003 08:18 CDT
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What's the next story you would create next? |
Reviewed By: thalian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 22:34 CDT
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well done. |
Reviewed By: NiceHam On: April 05, 2003 07:19 CST
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Please write more & I don't know what's next fiction would be. |
Reviewed By: dismoid On: April 04, 2003 04:49 CST
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The fic has been great so far and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. but I did think that the part between Laura and Travis was alittle rushed. It would be great if you could elaborate more in their encounters in the future.
keep up the good work.
PEACE |
Reviewed By: FictionFan On: April 02, 2003 06:03 CST
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What about Boss & Cindy? The rest of the story is to you. |
Reviewed By: NiceHam On: April 01, 2003 07:12 CST
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What about Boss & Cindy & Humans more erotic, think about it. |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: March 31, 2003 05:24 CST
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I would like you to write about humans who had love & erotic story,what do you think? |
Reviewed By: LS On: March 30, 2003 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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One small point, didn't Laura go to Travis's house to celebrate his birthday? Anyway, a very sweet part... tres romantic and I like Snoozer's speech about finding someone. I guess there is someone for eveyone.
Still, I'm so annoyed that I haven't seen eps. 52 cause they keep reruning the show in my area!
anyway I still want to see what happens next... |
Reviewed By: Billy On: March 28, 2003 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta write some more !!! Please update soon !!! |
Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I keep getting notifications that you updated but it seems you haven't. I love this story, please keep working on it.
Well okay, now to review each and every chapter.
Chapter 1: Very nice introduction into the world of Hamtaro. I loved how he was shy to admit his love for Bijou.
Chapter 2: I loved seeing Oxynard getting all nervous with Pepper and coming on her before he mated with her.
Chapter 3: Competition makes for wild love and in a threesome it makes for a hot time. I loved the shared Shmubby-Wubby.
Chapter 4: Confusion about love and comic trouble... the story of my life. I feel bad for the stripper ham... how about Snoozer get with her.
Chapter 5: It was sweet with Penelope's insecurities about how she looked and how Cappy was gentle with her.
Chapter 6: Hama Sutra... perfect really. I read the Karma Sutra a little. I could see those two really doing the Black Bee.
Chapter 7: Where did Boss meet Cindy? Oh well... no problem. Anyways... I love sex in the rain, the rain sets a perfect mood for slow loving mating.
Please keep writing and let me read this stuff. I am a loyal fan. |
Reviewed By: HamusAran On: March 25, 2003 13:10 CST
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Just read the last chapter, some ace writing I must say! keep writing more, its a really good fic. |
Reviewed By: Hulex [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 21:30 CST
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Just for this particular chapter, I think it would be stronger if you leave out Hamtaro thinking, "But I do love her." Obviously he does, and I know this is an internet fan fiction, but being a fellow writer, I thought I'd help out.
Everything else, though, is really good. But that's just what I'd do...
Hulex |
Reviewed By: Pashmina-Chan On: March 24, 2003 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta write more!!!!! |
Reviewed By: the old, wise, and wrinkly hamster On: March 22, 2003 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i also forgot to mention i really enjoyed that cappy and penelope chapter. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: the old, wise, and wrinkly hamster On: March 22, 2003 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the greatist, original work i have ever read dude! keep it up i cant wait for whats next! |
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