| "An Experimental Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
| Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
Title: Maizon Ikkoku
Reviewed By: Maizikko On: November 26, 2015 12:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like it.I just plain hate Kikyo and Inuyasha never
really saw Kikyo in Kagome. Kagome: I am Kagome Higurashi! I am not
Kikyo! I never was and never will be her! Tsubaki: You are her
reincarnation,I knew you were! And Kikyo never masturbated. And her
boobs are TINY.And Inuyasha was a virgin in the series. Kikyo was a
whore.
|
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 14:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it a lot better before the revisions...then again, i'm not into yuri...so "whatever flips your skirt" as my HS math teacher told me.
|
Reviewed By: me On: April 02, 2008 01:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
wtf...way too fuckin kinky
|
Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 14:56 PST
Comment/Review:
this is great update soon please
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 21:50 PST
Comment/Review:
it is a fanfic, right?......................
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 21:43 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
|
Reviewed By: demon hex core [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 19:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best masturbtion lemons i've ever read
|
Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: August 24, 2007 15:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
this is sick mindless plotless and tastless sex and there is no point n trying to add a plot and it is way to soon to say i love you and eww with the sota part he is a smart kid not a retard i hate to flame but this story is................... ..................................................................
|
Title: Chap 1
Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: August 24, 2007 15:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
not very original only earlier than most lemons and innicent Kags would never think like that about someone she barly knows
|
Reviewed By: Moreover On: February 17, 2007 20:24 PST
Comment/Review:
Damn, is he ever gonna update this? Moreover, will this site EVER get updated? >
|
Title: Pah.
Reviewed By: ReturnToSender On: February 03, 2007 23:47 PST
Comment/Review:
I don't understand how you can say so many things are wrong about this fic. sure, the grammar's a little off, but it's just a sexy fanfic! It doesn't NEED to be a novel, nor is it supposed to be. If it was it, would be under a more serious topic with a long, annoying plot that takes 10 chapters to reach the sex scene. Obviously, as you can see by the title, it's a story about really, REALLY hawt sex scenes, and that's all it needs. Quit treating it like the author's trying to win a pulitzer and read it like a sexy fanfic about... sex!
|
Reviewed By: What the hell? On: December 02, 2006 10:19 PST
Comment/Review:
Have you guys ever considered that the people who are flaming this story actually have some sense? You should have some more space between your paragraphs. You make them look all bunched up which turns off readers. Second, add more plot. It adds more interest then just pointless sex. Splenda is right. All this seems so wrong. The people who actually like this probably never read a literate story. They probably never read a story that actually has value, too. Pointless sex(says it in the name) is pointless! Third, the character should be more like themselves. It just sounds so stupid when you guys make the characters so unrealistic. To the people who may call me stupid, I actually gave some reasons why I don't like it. I'm not one of those flamers who suddenly say 'I don't like it' without a reason. I actually have a valid point.
|
Reviewed By: Zezerou On: October 11, 2006 14:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus, you can't dis a fanfic like this, it's SPECIFICALLY a Fic about crazy sex! The hotter and sexier it is, the better a rating it gets, he's not writing a novel xP Amazing btw!!
|
Reviewed By: Splenda On: October 09, 2006 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the bloody fucking hell??? Inuyasha fisted kagome??? I'm sorry, but that's wrong altogether. And all these people who are like 'oh, it's so good,' must never have read a /literate/ story.
|
Reviewed By: ja On: June 19, 2006 20:37 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, this is hot. You should update this! Must see Woman's Best Friend Part 6! >
|
| Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
