| "An Experimental Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: u are by far the best....
Reviewed By: reddragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 21:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U are the best writer I've ever seen. No one can compare to ur skill. nicly done keep updating this and all ur other works. Ur on my FAV. Writers so keep up the good work. (P.S. sry for my spelling, im used to battle.net chat)
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Reviewed By: Zsenny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 09:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic! Please update!!
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Reviewed By: HentaiGoddess On: October 05, 2003 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! keep going ^^
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Reviewed By: inuyashasdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 21:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is by far one of the best fics i've ever read plzs finsh it
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Reviewed By: Isuki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please try to work on spelling and a better vocabulary. Also stay in character please.
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Title: Your are god at writing lemons IMO
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never gave anyone a ten in my life. That chapter was funny * I though it was hentai bloopers or something* not only that erotic. You are god of writing this stuff.
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Reviewed By: Vash the stampede On: August 01, 2003 20:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
When will shippo get some I wonder if the little guy will love Inu's duaghter if him and Kag. Have 1. This story was corny but it was lemony lickin good |
Reviewed By: Kouga-sanLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 00:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
Cool story. Please update soon! I don't really read lemons that often but tis one is good. |
Reviewed By: wufeicustom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 19:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
please update more and please do it quickly lol |
Reviewed By: EarthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.o; was not expecting that at all makes me wode what else you wrote |
Reviewed By: TRUNKS' LIL BITCH On: July 08, 2003 16:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS A LTTLE CORNEY BUT STIIL GOOD AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 14:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just can't stop reading it I never get tired of it man some people know how to write an hentai. |
Reviewed By: Anna On: June 06, 2003 09:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was really enjoying the story until the last chapter. it's just so unfair to kagome and i really hope will fix things in the next chapter. it's too good of a story to be ruined by kikyo. i admit, i am very much anti-kikyo. i'm sorry if you are, but this is just my opinion. i'm a major inu/kag fan so please don't make me beg. it's not pretty. |
Reviewed By: Neese On: May 15, 2003 19:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Damn....Inu's in trouble now! I just hope that Kagome doesn't turn into a Lorena Bobbit (sp?) type and, how shall I say...dismember him? That would be evil (and painful). But he would deserve it! ;) Yeah, never read anything written in quite this manner before. I'm not really a fan of Inu/Kag pairings, so can't comment too much on that. |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I read the sencond chapter and damn kagome yelling out for sex wooooooooooo I love that you know kagome is HOT this story is great. |
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