| "An Experimental Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: tigerlily On: January 14, 2005 12:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great jo n the story. When you get the time make sure to write the next chapter. Great job.
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Reviewed By: lil-demoness On: November 08, 2004 18:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its was all good :D - Ok while I was readin' this questions kind of just poped up inot my mind. first Question is ... The whole masterbating thing the Kagome did in the bath tub, do real people acctually do that? And second and final question ... If someone masterbates, can they still have kids? ... Don't blame me for these questions, it just kind of popped up into my head as I was readin' Well I hope you answer these questions, I'd be so happy if you did. :D
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Reviewed By: nat* On: November 05, 2004 19:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this was good too..update.. please:P getting a lil perverted here..
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Reviewed By: nat* On: November 05, 2004 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was soo amazing.. Cute.. he I wonder if souta will go check on hes onee-chan.. and see inu... lolz that would be hilarious..:P That was good
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Reviewed By: nat* On: November 05, 2004 18:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this "IS" unique.. lolz.. it was fun to read .. i'm thinkin of readint eh rest.. hahah I'm such a perv.. :P
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Reviewed By: Yukima-Chan On: September 30, 2004 15:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
EVIL *hiss* Im a big Kikyou hater so havin Inu-chan fantisize about her dosent seem right to me well aneway good lemon ^^ WRITE MORE
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Reviewed By: Dragon_inu_yokai On: September 29, 2004 18:13 PDT
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O_O wow that is what I call origanal but u know what u need to do? U need to continu and make Inu do simaler*wink* then go to Kagome's and smell her excitmend and *beep* her
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Reviewed By: kagayaku rei tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 04:06 PDT
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okay, somehow, you broke through my barriers and now i feel REALLY hot!!! i am not stupid, i know what it means, but i don't like it that much!! oh, great. i need a cold shower now!! love it!!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 12:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t w00t!....one of the best writers!!....update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kag_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
you no...i kinda like it..but i hope this isnt some fic about inu not ever being able to get over kikyo... i hate kikyo.. i think shes a bitch, and not a female dog, a hory slut whos a fucken jack ass... ..i dont want this to be a flame..but in your next chap can you tell me if-if its about kikyo?
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Reviewed By: Senjakuxvi On: February 23, 2004 15:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL YOU ARE ONE HECK OF A WRITER- horny and precise to the point. Could use a bit more visuals, but w/e, still a very good fic. Continue!
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Title: The Story
Reviewed By: Ancient Wu On: February 15, 2004 13:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a great story man but i hope inu and kagome get back togeather. or at least inu beat the shit out of That other dude. I dont want to make you mad but i really really hope that other dude would just beat it
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Reviewed By: swtcandiee On: February 10, 2004 20:20 PST
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woah ..kagome getting a bit horny eh? kinda seems wrong but its all good ..update pleasee!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Rin On: November 16, 2003 15:39 PST
Comment/Review:
INU-SAMA?!?!?
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