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Reviewed By: Marlies On: April 14, 2005 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As i've already emphasized in my mail- this fanfic is just gorgeous and I can't get enough of it! I like the storyline and your ideas so much that your spelling errors don't really bother at all. I have to say that you are very creative and have a great understanding of each character in this fanfic. I'm so happy I got to read it, but also disappointed that you haven't updated yet...I really wanna know what's gonna happen in the end! Please, don't keep us waiting so long, please finish this fic first and then go on with the others +loool+ XD!!!
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Title: AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 16:41 EST
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When are you ever gonna update!? I love this fic and I can't wait to read more! You have a true talent at portreying emotions and characters, sceens and setting, love and deviltry. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! Love ya babe!
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Reviewed By: Callista Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, FINALLY!! B & V back together!!! Yippie!!! Can't wait til the next chapter!!! Please update as soon as possible! Oh, and for teh rating: SoW: 9, because you're a good writer, but there are some grammar errors. S&G: Spelling goes wrong sometimes. And the grammar too; sometimes the sentences goes wrong and there are commas where there should be full stops and full stops where there should be commas. and I shouldn't judge anyone for these since I've only got English as 2nd language and am more than likely to f*ck up in that department). O/C: Plots along line with this has been seen maybe hundreds of times (Vegeta-sei still existing, Bulma being a slave), but like the other really great author out there, you have managed to see it from a whole new angle, so it seems like you're the first who ever wrote one of these stories. EF: I just... love this story to bits... *sigh* OR: 9, cuz' it's one of my fav. stories between all the DBZ stories I've ever read... And remember, update really soon!!! Great christmas present idea to your fans out here!!! ~Callista Moon~
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooohooo!! Sorry I haven't commented in awhile, I just haven't been on period. Wonderful chapters, but it looks like trouble is brewing for Bulma and Vegeta where Freeza is concerned, plus the fact that Bulma needs to hurry up and tell Vegeta about Trunks already!!! Ok, well, hurry with the naxt chappy!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lei Lei On: September 25, 2004 18:38 EDT
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UPDATE!! pleeez! and soon!! i loove this story but you wont update! lol ttfn!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 19, 2004 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya, realy like youe story hope you up-date soon. I like how you keeped some on Gokus inocences but made him kaniveing as well. well do bye for now LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Bex Drake On: September 18, 2004 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool chapter. sorry for not reviewing sooner but i don't particulally like mediaminer. thanks for the email letting me know you'd updated. bex
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Reviewed By: SGBX On: September 15, 2004 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say but that your story is just the best DBZ fic I have ever read and even if the waiting period between chapters is so very very very long, I actually cannot find it within myself to stop reading. Really, your work is an inspiration.
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Title: meant to be
Reviewed By: carinne On: August 19, 2004 09:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this story is great and all but where is the next chapter? do you plan on resuming it or not? let me know each time i read it again and each time it end at the same point raging uh? so i would like to know see you on the group ccfleursdelys
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Reviewed By: Jess-X-Vegeta On: June 24, 2004 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is great, PLEASE REVIEW SOON!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that was a pretty hot lemon there! Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Oh my gosh!!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not see that coming at all!!! Celpia and Radditz, Bulma is going to blow up in his face!! And I can't believe what a hateful bitch Celpia is!! Bulma needs to check the girl real quick. Please update as soon as possible!! I really like the pace of the story but the updates need to come quicker. But since it's a matter of quality vs. quantity I guess I can sit at home an knit until the next exciting chapter. Keep up the great work!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion/Sorceresss Fujin On: May 10, 2004 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! EXCELLENT CHAPTER! Bulma is gonna be mad... lol!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo, looks like things are soon to be discovered by the King, eh? That should prove to be interesting! I hope Vegeta or Bulma comes out with their feelings soon, but it does bring out some intense angst in the story. I love it!!! Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 10:24 EDT
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I don't know why, but the thought of Vegeta asking Goku if he was "fucking" Bulma cracked me up! Excellent chapter as always.
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