| "Meant To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2012 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story poor bulma and vegeta i can not wait to see his reaction to the trunks news |
Title: Why wasn't this finished????
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2012 18:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why oh why was this never finished?? I am dying to see his reaction when he finds out Trunks is his you are so cruel to have left it there like that! This story was just amazing but it was tragic that it was never finished. But who knows maybe one day you will come back and finish it until then I will be waiting!!! |
Reviewed By: Ps On: August 16, 2010 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just spent all day reading this, and can say its one of the best fanfics i've read, it's quite tragic though since it hasnt been finished.
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 00:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great fanfic! but why did u stop?
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Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 17:36 EDT
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What the heck... Where did you go? You can't leave this unfinished. :[
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino On: June 10, 2007 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic! I love alternate universe B&V fics so this is just up my ally. The reason I rated so harshly on style and spelling and grammar was because many times you used quotations incorrectly. And often I couldn't distinguish who was talking about whom or what because of adverb usage. These problems didn't take away from the story too much though. The only major problem I see is that it is unfinished! It's good! You should finish it! I want to know what happens next! :)
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 22:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon! i'm dieing to know whats going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 16:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD
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Title: meant to be
Reviewed By: dbzlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 07:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i fell totally in love with your fic and i cant believe you you didnt finish it i am begging you to complete it i almost felt like crying when the when i saw that it was not finished and that the last time you updated it was almost 1.5years ago if you wrote a book abaut it i would buy it so pleassssssseeeeee update
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Title: meant to be
Reviewed By: dbzlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 07:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i fell totally in love with your fic and i cant believe you you didnt finish it i am begging you to complete it i almost felt like crying when the when i saw that it was not finished and that the last time you updated it was almost 1.5years ago if you wrote a book abaut it i would buy it so pleassssssseeeeee update
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Title: jaigobindg@bellsouth.net
Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been the best story i have ever read this story just grabs my attention when i first started reading it. Pleeease update soon!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: anelia On: November 19, 2005 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been the best story i have ever read this story just grabs my attention when i first started reading it. Pleeease update soon!
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Reviewed By: VegetasLindaLou On: May 31, 2005 21:28 EDT
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Your story is great. I really like the plot. please update soon, and I will check back soon.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 11, 2005 14:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
so this is me feeling really bad bc I added you to my favorites list but never reviewed your story. I love this story and the way you've played off this story so far. I loved how Vegeta and Bulma have come back together but you know that they have a lot of problems they are going to have to face soon. Its going so well and I love how the characters have grown through out the chapters. Great job; can't wait to see what you do next.
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Title: Meant To Be
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 21:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
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