| "When It Rains" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that Gohan and Goten give that bitch Chichi a piece of their minds! Leaving poor Goku all alone like that. I hope that Vegeta can help him cope and please I would also like to be notified, my e-mail is, jedimastermariana@yahoo.com, Update soon! ^_^ *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 15, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Crepian On: March 06, 2004 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That..that ChiChi..Oh my G-d, that bitch! I hate her! *takes a deep breath* Okay...calm down... Anyway, good story! I love it! I can't wait to see how Goku and Vegeta's relationship develope and how that would tie in with the murder. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 18:47 CST
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on the offchance you decide to update this lovely bit again, yes, i would like to be notified. I want to see how the little twists turn out. jewel@vegetalovers.every1.net
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: August 10, 2003 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Genius are often shy people. I'm a shy person but I don't fit this description, neither I'm saying you are a genius... but you certainly are something, 'cause you're able to make readers actually feel the emotions of the characters as few fic writers do. When I read the chapter where Chichi leaves Goku I almost cried along with him. Definitely you shall not be afraid of showing your work to the public, we are worthy reading good fics like this one.
I'm looking forward the next chapter hopping it won't take long to get to my eager hands.
PS: Please forgive any mistakes I may have done, english is not my native language... even if it had improved greatly after a year working with some foreign students.
PS2: Here is my e-mail adress so you can keep me in touch with the updades: galadig@yahoo.com.br |
Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I wasn't so sure at first that I'd like your story, but now you've got me intrigued. Please keep on writing. |
Reviewed By: arovak On: August 09, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow amazing story I luv it! I luv all personalitys you gave evry one, i like that there not to OOC. anyways write again really soon, i cant wait to hear what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Trunks girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly excellent! I love it! And kepp the chapters flowing! I'm addicted! |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 20:50 CDT
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I really loved it. I think Chichi is leaving Goku and taking all the money. THAT BITCH how could she? That guy that got that job at Capsule Corp has something to do with Goku beig sick i know it! Someone from the past most likely. I would like to know when you update. My email is
blinkoneeightytwotimes@hotmail.com
Thanks, i can't wait untilyou put up the next chapter ^_^ Until then . . . |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 15:25 CDT
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Awaiting more...... |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 06, 2003 09:40 CDT
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was it that Ian Mori guy that killed the girl?
great story. not too many mystery stories out there.
can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There isn't much happening yet...But I have enjoyed these first two parts. Your style of writing is interesting and holds my attention. Paragraphs are nicely detailed. I anticipate good plot development so I am eager to see what happens next.
A'nore |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Chichi's characterization is really amazing - neither flat & stereotypical nor OOC. Amazing job with the harpy! And Goku's dream has me seriously intrigued - LOVE that he got his tail back in it! Any change of that happening IRL? XD |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I get the feeling that was Bulma? (shrugs) In any case, you now have my full attention! That was one of the best first chapters of any story I've ever read. It grabs you, pulls you in and sucks the life from you until all you want is more! ^_^
Kurai: Pardon my dramatic authoress.
Naked, shameless Saiyajin men!! They make the world go round!! Especially when they're gettin' it on! (hops around happily)
Kurai: In other words..."PLEEZ, FOR THE LOVE OF YAOI, UPDATE!!!!" (ahem) Thank you.
Be not shy, you have abundant talent that must be shared!!
-Later DAyz & TAnx!!^_^
Chibi Gemi & Kurai |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: June 08, 2003 16:29 CDT
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I definitely want to read more of this. The plot is tightening slowly now and the anticipation of pending action makes me all antsy. Get out your next chapter soon! |
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