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Title: Disappointment
Reviewed By: volostheguardian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu know, I really liked this story before, but refraining from past experiences and reading it now, I find that this story had so much potential, but has just slid in convolution and hilarious antics, that serve no enjoyable purpose. This fanfic has turned into a pile of fanservice bullshit, and it isn't that good anymore. I would only recommend reading the first chapter. This review will probably get erased by Warpwizard anyway, if he comes back on from watching his absurd hentai.
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Title: Work. Now. Or die.
Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holds a gun to Asuka's head* Next chapter. Soon. Or the red head gets it.
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Title: ...WOW!
Reviewed By: haku120 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm stunned...I never thought someone could make such a good story! Keep it up!
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Title: not complaining
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy FUCK!!! I thought i was a horny, pentup, helpless pervert! you take the cake, and definently the pie. one chapter is enough to tire out my perverted brain to the point that i'm quite satisfied....AURG...EEWW, THAT DIDN'T SOUND RIGHT!!! anyway, good going.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
and that was only the first chapie! what was that, fifteen or so lemons? WTF how was shinji still standing.
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Reviewed By: Democritus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, my friend, are long overdue for an update. Don't leave us hanging like this! Finish it!
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Reviewed By: dexter123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What can i say, this is a superb fic! love it!
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Title: mojop
Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhh...YES! YES! YES!
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Title: You found her...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... the Asuka we all knew was hiding beneath that flaming exterior but slightly warped interior. Did it really take a shrink to unleash all of that? The only thing I would have embellished (and it's not a knock at this fine piece of erotica) is that once she bacame "unbound" as it were, I think she would have become more of a "screamer"... something just tells me that that everything would have opened up and she would have made a lot more noise... but that's just me. Wonderful writing... "like a surfer on God's sexiest board" - that's classic. I'm a fan... W.
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Title: Payback
Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written. enjoyed the scene where mihoshi(soory bout the misspell) joine them for menange a trois. would like to see further chapters. please e-mail me when they are up at graybear32@yahoo.com
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Title: FRICKIN EXCELLENT
Reviewed By: MudvayneMasochist On: July 29, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEST. DAMN. FANFIC. I'VE. EVER. READ. Would have given everything a 20 out of 10. It's that good.
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick-ass! Nice to see that you updated the story. Personally, I don't mind the absense of citrus. To people out there who do - YOU ARE ALL FRICKIN MORONS. Hope you guys realize that EVERY CHAPTER previous to this one was a huge lemon. The backround this chapter provides is a nice contrast to the "normal" happenings in the Ikari, Saotome, and Tenchi households. Anyway, 'nough ranting, to the review!~ Your style kicks ass. Keep it simple and keep them wanting more (simple doesn't mean simplistic - seventeen ! (seems you've done that anyway =P ...) No major spelling/grammar mistakes I noticed and the story in general continues to intrigue me. Love it. Keep it up and update soon. Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Reikson [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is vewwy, vewwy intewesting. Suffice it to say that you, Warpwizard, writes some of the best lemon-fics that I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the great work, please update as soon as possibly for you
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Reviewed By: Spike of Doom On: June 11, 2005 09:57 CDT
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This story is probly the best evangelion lemon fic ive ever read its got the best lemons and its even got a plot... which most good lemons never have..(albite small plot) and i especially like the crossover aspect of this story!.
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