| "Payback" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: JadedTrowa On: April 06, 2003 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is extremely good, I enjoyed it greatly. Keep up the good work, nice originilizim with that whole B-Shinji thing. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Scott On: April 13, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a true fan of naughty lemons. Expecaly when its great characters like shinji getting what he deserves. I find your story erotic and fun to read.
I can't wait to see who shows up in future. |
Reviewed By: okonic On: July 15, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite literally a fantastic work of fanfiction. Kasumi the cum-slut? Asuka the devil girl, who is torn between being a dom and a sub, I can't wait to see where this story will end up. |
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