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Title: not complaining
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy FUCK!!! I thought i was a horny, pentup, helpless pervert! you take the cake, and definently the pie. one chapter is enough to tire out my perverted brain to the point that i'm quite satisfied....AURG...EEWW, THAT DIDN'T SOUND RIGHT!!! anyway, good going.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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and that was only the first chapie! what was that, fifteen or so lemons? WTF how was shinji still standing.
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Reviewed By: Democritus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, my friend, are long overdue for an update. Don't leave us hanging like this! Finish it!
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Reviewed By: dexter123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What can i say, this is a superb fic! love it!
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Title: mojop
Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhh...YES! YES! YES!
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Title: You found her...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... the Asuka we all knew was hiding beneath that flaming exterior but slightly warped interior. Did it really take a shrink to unleash all of that? The only thing I would have embellished (and it's not a knock at this fine piece of erotica) is that once she bacame "unbound" as it were, I think she would have become more of a "screamer"... something just tells me that that everything would have opened up and she would have made a lot more noise... but that's just me. Wonderful writing... "like a surfer on God's sexiest board" - that's classic. I'm a fan... W.
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Title: Payback
Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written. enjoyed the scene where mihoshi(soory bout the misspell) joine them for menange a trois. would like to see further chapters. please e-mail me when they are up at graybear32@yahoo.com
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Title: FRICKIN EXCELLENT
Reviewed By: MudvayneMasochist On: July 29, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEST. DAMN. FANFIC. I'VE. EVER. READ. Would have given everything a 20 out of 10. It's that good.
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick-ass! Nice to see that you updated the story. Personally, I don't mind the absense of citrus. To people out there who do - YOU ARE ALL FRICKIN MORONS. Hope you guys realize that EVERY CHAPTER previous to this one was a huge lemon. The backround this chapter provides is a nice contrast to the "normal" happenings in the Ikari, Saotome, and Tenchi households. Anyway, 'nough ranting, to the review!~ Your style kicks ass. Keep it simple and keep them wanting more (simple doesn't mean simplistic - seventeen ! (seems you've done that anyway =P ...) No major spelling/grammar mistakes I noticed and the story in general continues to intrigue me. Love it. Keep it up and update soon. Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Reikson [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is vewwy, vewwy intewesting. Suffice it to say that you, Warpwizard, writes some of the best lemon-fics that I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the great work, please update as soon as possibly for you
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Reviewed By: Spike of Doom On: June 11, 2005 09:57 CDT
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This story is probly the best evangelion lemon fic ive ever read its got the best lemons and its even got a plot... which most good lemons never have..(albite small plot) and i especially like the crossover aspect of this story!.
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Title: Ch.9 is great
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: June 10, 2005 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.9 was just what I was needing. I really don't care that there wasn't a lemon in there becuz it wasn't necessary. This was a plot chapter and it explained a lot about your story and it maskes more sense now. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Psiberkiwi On: June 08, 2005 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
To the idiot who posted the last three reviews (yes, I'm pretty sure they're all from the same person), the fic clearly stated that all three girls were over the legal age! Get a life! To WarpWizard: you're writing is wonderful - don't let boof-heads like this put you off! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Ramiel On: June 05, 2005 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You smarmy bastard. My brain says "oh, I get it now. That all makes sense. What an informative, useful, and generally awesome chapter." My other brain says "Where is the sex? WHERE IS THE SEX?!" You need to put your life on hold and finish this. Don't whine to me about crap like school, or a job, or a relationship, rent/taxes. Just finish this. Now. Don't you love pushy fanfic readers?
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