| "Payback" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: mikeyguy On: July 16, 2003 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
srry bout that i mean to write it like this:
MORE MORE MORE |
Reviewed By: mikeyguy On: July 16, 2003 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOLDFONT SIZE UnderlineMORE!!!! i love this story. it isnt often u find a NGE crossover w/ Ranma and Tenchi. It took a while to get this chapter out, but could bring the next sooner? |
Reviewed By: Zenko On: July 15, 2003 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh Heh. *mouth twitching and slightly open* Sorry. *shakes head and recovers* This is really really good. One of the more kinky ones I've read, but it's amazingly original and has a good story to add to the mood. I have no words to describe the real "action" just WOAH! You also have really good, plausible and scientific reasons for Yuki to have a phsycological connection to Shinji after the latest chapter. Great work and keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: W On: July 14, 2003 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say. Wow.... |
Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hawt once again.
Bout time though, I was just cleaning up my hunting gear. |
Reviewed By: mastermage On: July 12, 2003 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Warpwizard.
I just stumbled upon your little masterpiece here by pure chance and I'm really glad I did.
This is the best crossover-lemon containing Evangelion I've read.
The only thing that put me a little of was your introduction. maybe you should think about changing that.
Hopefully you'll finish chapter 4 very soon. I can't wait to see what happens next .....(get's knocked out for being a pervert)
By the way, I am giving you only 9 Overall Rating because I know you can do even better. |
Reviewed By: raul On: July 11, 2003 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa... hot story... i like the use of anal sex |
Reviewed By: twin evil On: July 01, 2003 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic. Hope you write the next one. |
Reviewed By: MagicHateBall On: June 24, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, this is one of my guilty pleasures. The crossovers are way out there, and the characterization is all over the place, but... hey, it's a lemon. It's fun, and that's all that really matters. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Guruhoro [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. I'd heard of this fic from a buddy, but I had no idea it was this good. It created a nice mix of laughter and erection I have never experienced before. After reading only the first chapter, I've nearly stained my pants. And that might have been a problem, since my younger brother is in the same room...
Anyway, I consider this one of the legendary masterpieces. Fuckin' awesome, really. |
Reviewed By: Pharsti On: June 14, 2003 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking awesome. This is without a doubt the best sexfic I have ever read. And I've read a LOT.
Do continue. |
Reviewed By: Jonathan On: June 13, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just really liked this story all around. |
Reviewed By: CPoland On: June 11, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original are you continueing it? |
Reviewed By: Showstopper On: May 31, 2003 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to give you your props for writing one of the most original crossover lemons in fanfiction. The idea of Asuka being nice is cool and Berserker Shinji is a nice touch as well. I do wish you would've concentrated a bit more on Asuka's therapy though. Glad you put Mihohshi in there. Just a vote for the future, I wouldn't mind seeing Nabiki, Shampoo, and Ukyo get in there somehow.
Keep up the good work and have a good day. |
Reviewed By: Mystic God [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2003 07:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn you, it's been so long.... I need more. I'll have your children if you update soon...
BTW after chapter 4 part 2, I had a thought on who you might include. Maybe you could bring someone else from Eva in like Hikari or Rei.
Payback Hikari for being such a good friend all those years by letting Shinji give her a good rogering.
Or payback Rei for being a bitch to here by letting Shinji do the above stated :D |
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