| "Blood-Red Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark angle cat On: July 02, 2003 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
first i loved it
second who the hell like the bitchy kikyo
i looooooove (^V~) |
Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it |
Reviewed By: Sorrow On: June 10, 2003 02:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh you have to write more you have to what well he do. come on please write more sniffle please |
Reviewed By: kagome On: June 10, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I hope you continue soon! Some of the chapters are missing chunks i think. |
Reviewed By: LadyMulti [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
^-^ Good story. Do continue it. |
Reviewed By: Blazewing On: May 27, 2003 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, and hopefully you'll update soon! ^_^
One thing that gets me though, are the chunks that seem to be missing in a few chapters - for example, ch. 10 where Kag and Inu are talking about pups. There was one other part of that chapter where a chunk was missing, but I can't remember what was happening except that it was before the pup talk. I can't help wondering what's happening in the missing parts because they seem to be important to the story.
Would you mind emailing me the complete chapter with the missing parts fixed? Pretty please with sugar on top? My email is: jadetarma@hotmail.com
Arigato! And keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Wild Kat On: May 18, 2003 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this story!
Please, PLEASE, write more chapters after chapter 14!!
This is one of the BEST stories that I have ever read!!!
Will Kagome disoby Inuyasha's rules?
What will happen? |
Reviewed By: angel99 On: May 17, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give the whole thing a ten...because this fic just rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The plot is very good and the yokai inu and hanyou inu just fits perfectly to the story. So do the other characters. I enjoyed it very much!!!
I hope you write more stories about inuyasha and kagome! I want to read aa of them!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
There are some paragraphs missing in Chapter Ten. Maybe you should reload it; I'd really like to read them.
It's kinda' funny, actually... "having (ev)ery female we come acros..." hee! |
Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan On: May 09, 2003 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic it one of my fav. I think that you should go with both of your ideas in future chapters. This is a great twis to Inu-chan and Kagome-chan's relationship. Ihope to see futer chaters posted soon! |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 09:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, maybe it's just me, but I felt sorry for poor Kouga-kun. *pouts* I'm not the only one that likes Kouga, am I? O_o; I can't help it, I like his character, and he's not afraid to let Kagome know how he feels, unlike a certain hanyou... ^_^
But, still, it was a good idea to bring him into the fic, along with Sesshoumaru. I can't wait to see what happens now that they have arrived on the scene. I wonder.... will Kouga be able to just let Inuyasha have Kagome.... hmmmm.... ^_^
Also, wonderful lemon with a human Inuyasha! My hentai heart loved it! ^_^
And on your question... O_o; what a silly question! Of course you should continue this! If you don'tt I'll send my rabid pack of youkai hamsters after you! Be afraid! Be VERY afraid! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! O_o; *looks around nervously and clears her throat* o_O; Ummmm.... yeah... uh... just continue this okay. ^_^
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: bsasami153 On: May 06, 2003 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One more Demon writing to go...! |
Reviewed By: Nick F. On: May 06, 2003 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew!
That is SOO hot!
Well, I really think you should take your friend's suggestion and continue this. Damn! This is good stuff! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I very much think that you should continue. These are some fine lemons, but it doesn't seem to me that the story ends here.
Many issues were brought up: the rules, offspring, Kagome's place in this new "pack," and now issues with Sess and Kouga (great move having it be both of them, by the way). At least a few of these should be resolved before it's over. I love reading different people's takes on youkai culture. |
Reviewed By: ShellBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue turn him into demon one more time plz |
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