| "Blood-Red Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 17:12 CDT
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AHHH!!!! *BITES* WAAHH!!!! T-T YOU STOPPED IT RIGHT THERE!!! YOU MONSTER!!! HOW COULD YOU!?!?!?
o.o;;; Er...I mean...Please continue ASAP or I shall surely die!!! ^_^ Thank you!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I bet it's Kouga...^_^;;; That's just my guess!!! Ooh, he's gonna be REALLY jealous I bet!!! XD |
Reviewed By: I_luv_inuandkurama On: May 04, 2003 23:42 CDT
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I really liked your story, please keep writing, can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you have a great style of writting this is one of my favorite stories so far. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 07:31 CDT
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Whether it's jealous Kouga or Sessoumaru or even schemy Naraku or schemy-jealous Kikyo, next chap expects fun and yumminess!
(Memo to self: too much sugar) |
Reviewed By: lulu On: May 01, 2003 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, all I can say is, WOW! I mean, there aren't too many well written lemons around here, and lemme just say yours is just great! Great writing style and I just love the lemons! ^__^ Update soon cuz I'm loving this fic! |
Reviewed By: samantha On: April 30, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...um...very discriptive..yes,nice story.this was written very well. |
Reviewed By: hi On: April 30, 2003 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story please put more chapters up |
Reviewed By: Flowery On: April 22, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! Please update soon. I can't wait for the human lemon ^_^. |
Reviewed By: tessa On: April 21, 2003 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was so oooooooooooo gooooooood...it took a while for me to read the update but I finally did.....And it was so DAMN GOOD!!!! a lot of SEX but whos complaining^.^....NEWAYS YOU JUST KEEP ON REMINDING ME when you update because I have to keep reading this...what other fics do you have...are they NC-17 rated r and/or pg13 I would like to read them all....oh I have 2 fics on FF.net...Touch choices and I miss You but they are under my pen name tessa...just like it is spelled....neways I think my fics are a little cliche but demented but please read them I would like your comments and thoughts....Ja ne |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: April 19, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grate fanfic! i had lots of fun reading it (not that kind of fun) anyway it was grate. |
Reviewed By: Dah_one On: April 16, 2003 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one EXCELLENT story. Your language and grammar are flawless! And the way you describe whatever happen, not only do the descriptions give me vivid pictures of what is taking place, make my mouth waters (WONDERFUL lemon scenes. I like male dominance lemon...he, I'm a male what can I say), but I'm pretty sure my English teacher will give you an A for them, too.
Great job! Update soon. I really want to know what happen after they talk about having kids. Can't wait for more fluff and the human lemon that will come ^_^ |
Reviewed By: WOWWWWWWWW On: April 16, 2003 15:08 CDT
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wow great story |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: April 16, 2003 11:29 CDT
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This is a supercool story. Write more soon. You definately can't tell this is your first Lemon. You did an amazing job.
SHADY |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was your first lemon? I certainly couldn't tell. You did an excellent job on it. It was descriptive and captivating without coming across as smutty.
I'm enjoying the storyline of this fic. The growing relationship of Inuyasha and Kagome, as they learn more intimate aspects of one another. The possibility of Kagome carrying his child is another awwww factor. ~_^ I'm left with one feeling though.... they are experiencing a lot of happiness right now.... there's going to be a bomb dropped on our happy couple, isn't there? Some kind of misunderstanding or even Kagome being kidnapped *clears throat* again. (She has a tendency for that doesn't she. ~_^) It would be nice to see Inuyasha's protective side come forth again, to save his mate and future pup. *clears throat, again... hint, hint* ^_^
Anyway, I have enjoyed this fic thus far and can't wait to see where it goes next, not to mention the human Inuyasha lemon. I am such a hentai at heart. lol Update soon.
~**ssjprincesss**~ |
Reviewed By: sun_goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, put a new chapter up soon! |
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