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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's september!!! please update soon your story roxs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i couldve sworn i reviewed *smiles uneasily* my apologies...i just have to say that this story is just beautiful...BEAUTIFUL...the emotions displayed are so realistic in the character...very wonderful story
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the analogies you have in this story are great, its really good writting and extremely entertaining. definatly a great writting job.
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:35 CDT
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In sooth, I tell ya' that I enjoyed the fic....all 9 chapters - and I'm glad that you kept it fairly light-hearted. (I just don't think I can get through some of the more complex-angsty fics otherwise....So, now that you know what a bore I am...)
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Title: Proposition
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Imagine my embarrassment when I discover that I have read this fic so many times, but never reviewed it. I love this story. The things that pull me back to read it time after time is just how well the story melds together. The lemons are tastefully done, and a natural part of the story. The angst is very well done and also blends smoothly, but the thing that made me lmao was when he tied her to the tree. I just wasn't expecting that. Anyway, maybe the reason you can't seem to get any drive to write more on this story is because it kinda feels complete. Maybe a chapter or two to sort out anything unfinished, but it feels pretty complete to me. How bout you?
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Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, took me a couple days to read through the whole thing, but I must say, it's very well written, and about your last author's note, it's the same with me, I haven't updated any of my stories in almost a month. I don't believe in rushing people into getting their work done, if you rush someone then the product won't be as good. And one other thing...a thumb war between Inu and Grandpa?!?! That was just wierd.
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Dreamer On: March 08, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i LOVE this fic it one of my favourite fic now PLEES! PLEES! PLEES! UPDATE SOON I'm going crazy waiting for updates soooooooo pleeeeeeessssss UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Geminidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why don't you have Kagome get pregnent? That would be fun to see Inuyasha's reaction. What were the lab results that the docter wanted to discuss with Kagome's mom? And what about Shippo? You haven't really spoken about him and his relationship to Inuyasha. Maybe you should have just a chapter of Inuyasha and Shippo dealing with Inuyasha being Kagome's 'husband' and Shippo's 'father'. You could have Inuyasha teach Shippo how to hunt and fish. I hope you like these sugestions, plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune On: December 27, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY RULES !!!!!!!!! B!
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Reviewed By: uematsufan On: December 24, 2003 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow - this fic is beyond good... I vote for B btw, it has a lot more possiblities then any of the others.
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Reviewed By: uematsufan On: December 24, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow - this fic is beyond good... I vote for B btw, it has a lot more possiblities then any of the others.
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Title: Ooooh Look at the Pretty Title
Reviewed By: Bre aka Chaosti On: December 24, 2003 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! I love your fic it's deffinatly like one of my top three, please up date soon I hated waiting for the new chapter. Just as an idea have Kagome get pregnant, I know that's not original but I'd still love too see it happen. I was great when you made Inuyasha go demon it was so cool how he was protecting Kagome.
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Reviewed By: swt sugr On: December 22, 2003 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! this is one hell of a good story, Probably one of the best I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: general 51 On: December 21, 2003 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a + b screw c
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: December 19, 2003 23:19 CST
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B. Kagome is to stuburn to stay in bed herself. Please update as soon as possible.
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