| "Proposition" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: playfullpup17 On: July 16, 2003 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is a really good fan-fic. Ummmmmm I dunno if you can do this but uh can you get back to me and tell me if this is a Inuyasha/Kagome fic NOT an Inuyasha/Kikyou? uhh my adress is playfullpup17@aol.com. thanx I would appriciate it.
~Serena |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, I really like it. You write very well, and I think that the way you show their emotions is great. I was hoping that the Kikyou issue would eventually be addressed; I'm glad to see that it has. I look forward to your next chapter...and I think it's very good that you wish to take your time with writing it...that says a lot about you ^^ |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The lemon's that you do are fantastic! I've haven't read any that good in a while! Please keep up the good work and very good job staying in character! |
Reviewed By: Calinda On: July 16, 2003 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing I can't wait for the next chapter if there is one in progress. I love your work it's wonderful. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: July 16, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is really good. Can't wait to read what would happen! Will Kagome get pregnant? |
Reviewed By: ccsinjapan On: July 03, 2003 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed it!! i just luv reading luv stories..everything was good but i think u should have made it a little longer so i could and other ppl could enjoy it more ^^ |
Reviewed By: Calinda2004 On: June 23, 2003 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great. I found it Fun and filled with lots of areas that you could laugh at forever. Hope you continue this story. |
Reviewed By: tigereyzgurl609 On: June 21, 2003 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I know that my ratings may sound a little exaggerated, but I *love* your fanfic! It was so detailed and I loved how you included Inuyasha and Kouga's love in it! Personally, I love it when two guys fight over Kagome, it may sound like the common thing to do, but I'm a fan of jealousy in fanfics, *lol*! Well, keep on writing! I hope to someday be able to write like you! Maybe sometime I could email you a fanfic and you could review it, that'd be awesome! Don't stop writing! |
Reviewed By: DBprincess116 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! that was AMAZINGLY well written. I hope you're happy with the way it came out
peace and love |
Reviewed By: Kami-sama On: June 18, 2003 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaiiii !!! There is another chapter, ne ?
Good courage !!!
Bye |
Reviewed By: Lutra On: June 16, 2003 00:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your fic thus far. I'm assuming since you called the demon cat "Kilala" that you've seen the English dubbed version? In the Japanese version her name is Kirara. The Japanese language doesn't have the letter L, so I haven't the foggiest where the translators came up with that name. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: gina On: June 14, 2003 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... lol your sure that this is your first lemon?? hehe well I thought it was great! It would be a nice mini series!
keep updating!
-gina |
Reviewed By: MikoMadeleine On: June 14, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic; the real draw is the interaction between Kagome and InuYasha. The idea of her protecting him was original and touching, and the lemon wasn't too sour. So I really enjoyed it! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Your lemons are so...wow! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: ~*Jennay*~ On: June 10, 2003 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a typo. " Your lucky that I can't sit you." When in fact, if she said that word..he would have been sat! But he wasn't. Oh well, just thought I would tell you that! Good story! |
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