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Title: Manda
Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was truely great. So far. I haven't the time right now to read the rest, so I'll read it later. Its really really really good. Perfect 10, and I don't give those often. Thanks... ~Manda
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Title: poll
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I think it shud be B ( inu trying to keep kag in bd). The next chapter shud be Inu and Grandpa's duel, when Kag is better. Then during that chapter or after it Mir and San get together. :)
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Reviewed By: JC On: December 19, 2003 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it!Please update soon!Oh by the way I choose A,B,and C!!!!!
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Reviewed By: I LUV UR STORY On: November 25, 2003 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT IS HENTAI ????????PLEASE TELL ME!!!!!!!! OH P.S.ON THE 6TH CHAPTER, YOU WROTE HER ERECTION!
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 16, 2003 01:04 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great! What will happen next? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: broken_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the desscriptiveness at the beginning of the chapter with the fight, though it did slack a bit towards the end, but was still enjoyable. As for you ideas on what to do with the next chapter, here's a suggestion: Do them both. Have Inuyasha transform and have him not recognize her to begin with and hurt her, not a lot, just hurt, not try to kill her. And then have the demon half realize who she is and have him do something weird to heal her. Gee, I'm such a sadist. Lol. Well, that's just my suggestion. Keep up the good writing. Later - broken_angel, a.k.a. Crash
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Reviewed By: Angel452 On: September 15, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. With Inuyasha and Kagome's growing relationship, there could be the possiblity of Kagome becoming pregnant. (hint hint) What could happen then? What would her family think? Especially her Grandfather.
Please update as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: voicegirllara On: September 14, 2003 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi,
i just wanted to say that ur fic ROCKS!!! i really enjoy it. i dont usually write reviews for fics. i only do it for the ones that i think are worth my time reading and well this one DEFINANTLY is. i've read many fanfictions (started when i was like 9 and now im 17), mostly hentai ones and this one is by far one of the best that i've read. keep up the good work and update soon k?
thanks,
voicegirllara@yahoo.com |
Title: Full Demon Inuyasha
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
we've all read story's were Inuyasha turns full demon and mates with kagome, or rapes her, or kills her...but none of the full demon storys ever happen after normal henyou Inuyasha has already clamed her...that has to affect something right he'd be able to smell that she was his mate and proable wouldn't want to hurt her, I have an Idea that involves both full demon Inuyasha and a near death for kagome...
Ok so kagome said she would let him protect her, to back off when he thinks things are getting to dangerous...the happen apon a fearly powerful demon things get sticky and Inuyasha has kagome back off...let say Inuyasha gets over confedent and gets hurt badly enough to be knocked out *and knocking his sword away*...Kagome rushes into the battle now angery because she thinks Inuyasha is dead...there is more fighting and the already injered kagome is fataly wounded...know enter the full deomon Inuyasha *if your watching Inuyasha on cartoon network you know that Inuyasha's demon blood is awaked when his life is threatend* but how will Demon inuyasha react to his mate fataly wouned...*his blood is healing, at least thats what I think, and you chose weather or not he gives his blood to kagome and if it has any affect on her* and I don't think that the story is boring in the least...I hope that this Idea can help at all |
Reviewed By: jammies2000 On: August 08, 2003 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is very good I really like this story please write more. |
Reviewed By: dude On: July 27, 2003 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall it's good and gj with all the comments hoping to see more soon |
Reviewed By: me On: July 24, 2003 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just so you know in the first page near the begining Kagome says sit but Inuyasha dosen't "sit" |
Reviewed By: Spacegirlval On: July 23, 2003 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic the only thing is that Inuyasha would do that to Kagome not responding her. i have a idea why don't u think about it: Kagome get's kidnapped by Kikyo and ge't pined by the tree and Inuyasha sense she is in trouble and goes to find her unconcious and on the verge of diying and Kikyo being the cause. Inuyasha looks at kikyo and says why are u doing this (or something like that) and she says some stuff and blah blah blah and then kikyo says do you really think I love some half-breath like u! i only loved u because of ur human selfe nothing more! And now ur gonna lose the one who truly loved u what a pitty but I guess that's how life is. Inuyasha growles and attacks Kikyo killing her. Then the soul gaderers release Kagome and he goes running to her and says he is sorrry for everything and catches a glimps of the mark he did to her and remembers how she asked him that question then he says yes I will never leave u I am sorry please Kagome don't die u can't leave me u promised but she dosent wake up (eventually like in a couple of hours she does but is still on the verge of diying but Inuyasha saves her some way u deside). Keep in mind that I thought about the whole kikyo thing with the help of the previous dream Inuyasha had about Kagome diying. well bye-bye and keep writting by the way please e-mail me at Panthera89@Msn.com to tell me when u have updated this story so I can read it well bye!
~Panthera~ |
Reviewed By: jtocool On: July 23, 2003 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it please git the next one out as fast as posible, please. |
Reviewed By: ash On: July 17, 2003 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your story. it made my laugh a little too. you should write some more. |
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