| "Proposition" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Your lemons are so...wow! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: ~*Jennay*~ On: June 10, 2003 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a typo. " Your lucky that I can't sit you." When in fact, if she said that word..he would have been sat! But he wasn't. Oh well, just thought I would tell you that! Good story! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, if my man started crying like that i would cry too...thats the sweetiest thing I have ever read...I can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: June 04, 2003 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so great!(tear)Keep writing because you do it so well. Update soon and don't hold back, let it all out honey! |
Reviewed By: Gerankel On: June 03, 2003 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooh... I liked it. It was so romantic and so well written. Not that it ever would but if this were to happen on the anime I would want it to be just like this. Both seemed very in character and believeable. Also, I was pleased with your style and grammer. Just a few small mistakes here and there but the story was so good I can't even remember what they were now. :::sigh::: All I can say is thank you and please continue this, I beg you. Maybe if you have time and the muse strikes you, you could bring together my fav couple Sess/Rin (as an adult of course). PLEASE?
Cynthia |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune On: June 02, 2003 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
(muhahaha! after many a month of computer freezing and operating, I'm ba-ack!!)
HI! ME! I've come out of my tunnel of computer crashing and YAY! THIS IS A GOOD FIC! CONTINUE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Deanna/Angel On: June 01, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good fic. i hope u continue to write more to this story and many more
Deanna/Angel |
Reviewed By: Dragon girl On: May 31, 2003 23:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome! another great story! please write more, itz really good! |
Reviewed By: niasdreams On: May 30, 2003 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an excelent plot , and the lemon was very sweet and tastful.not something to need a cold shower yet not something to go oh god like that would happen.very nice. i hope you continue. |
Reviewed By: Griffin On: May 29, 2003 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Realistic love scene. Can't wait to see how Kouga reacts. You should continue the story. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a bit flowery for my taste, and redundant in places (facts are repeated).
I'd like to see how Kouga reacts! I wonder how Kagome will feel if Inuyasha gets all smug. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nice, simple story. I wonder what Kouga's powers are like now that he's got all those shards (the number seems appropriate -- fifteen shards seem a force to be reckoned with in keeping with Kagome & co.'s determination to get them, and Kagome's concern that Inuyasha will be hurt), but it seems to me that this kind of action isn't the focus of the piece.
I like the end of the chapter. A lot of writers have their first kiss, and then they immediately jump to more intimate things. This was much more realistic.
Gonna reach Ch. 2 later! |
Reviewed By: Usagi Kou On: May 29, 2003 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! hope you continue it.
Ja ^^ |
Reviewed By: Anime-Angel On: June 01, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write more I mean that was good. I never heard of that kind of thing, where its kouga that starts it by asking Kagome to sleep with him. Please write more. |
Reviewed By: Dia On: June 18, 2003 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was, in all areas, absolutely kickbutt material. I LURVED it tremendously! I felt all of the emotion ebb into my mind, conjuring delicious imagery, from its passion, anger, and sympathetic moments. You projected a rare, though appealing side to our hanyou. His tenderness was absolutely kawaii, along with his fragile wonder concerning Kagome. The characterization was dead on, the dialogue laden with life... Wonderful! I also appreciated the love scene you inserted. It was so, completely endearing, fiery, and tastefully done; I've never found mindless smut appealing, but you definetly manage to quench my interest to witness such intimacy between both of the beloved characters. Ah, an on the Kouga issue, I feel that you handled him well, so no worries there. Once again, I loved it! Keep up the great work, and don't leave us hangin' too long for the next installment!
---Cookiemunstar97@aol.com |
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