| "Surviving Together: Retribution" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikki_Leigh On: November 29, 2003 22:14 PST
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Please update ST-Retribution soon! It's been like 3 months! I'm dying here! *cries*
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Reviewed By: JC On: September 27, 2003 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LAVENDER GODDESS V, I'VE BEEN READING YOUR STORIES SINCE YOU STARTED POSTING SURVIVING TOGETHER ON FANFICTION.NET!!!!!! I am a major fan! But...but....AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE SOON!!?!?!?!?! ;_; The suspense is killing me! Strictly speaking, as one writer to another, this is the best DBZ set of fics I've ever read. The story is creative and the characters are almost never Out of Character. (Well, Vegeta was only somewhat OOC in Falling in love for the first time, but that doesn't matter, it still rocked!) So, dying of suspence here, I beg on bended knee for you to update soon! Fan forver, JC
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Reviewed By: butterflyV
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I think it's rather harsh of Bulma to say that Vegeta was never there for her during that year, when he NEVER even knew she was alive at that point. I reckon that the woman who Radditz threatened earlier should talk to Bulma on the way to Namek. And if Bulma's memories are wished back first, that should give her more than enough evidence as to how Radditz had manipulated her and erased her memories of ever being with Vegeta. If Radditz is wished back, then something should be stripped from him like he did to Bulma. |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 20:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update this soon! I love it!! Bulma must choose Vegeta! |
Reviewed By: metalfreak On: August 12, 2003 12:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so, when is the next chapter going to be?
i can't wait to see what else is going to happen to poor Vegeta...hope its going to be fun...keep me in suspense. |
Reviewed By: metalfreak On: August 12, 2003 12:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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so, when is the next chapter going to be?
i can't wait to see what else is going to happen to poor Vegeta...hope its going to be fun...keep me in suspense. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 04:08 PDT
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IM BACK! Sorry I've been aowl with out net service but I just read the chapys I missed and U R SO SO SOS OSOSOSOOOOOOO COOL! I love this story please continue now that Vegeta has seen Bulma's mark HIS mark hell is going to break lose!Radditz is such a hot villian YUM! I LOVE U BABE!
Any whoo UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! and More lemon cause the one with Vegeta and ATae YUMMMMMMMMMM!
Later! |
Reviewed By: Heidi On: August 11, 2003 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. But I can not wait to know what will happen next. So please update real soon. Great story you are a excellent writer. |
Reviewed By: SakuraBlue On: August 10, 2003 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, you had me on the edge of my seat and I never expected the last part w/Radditz showing his SSJ side. Ya know, I was thinkin; if Raditz killed Vegeta, Bulma might regain her past memory through the bond somehow eh? Then once Trunks/Garock found out enough about the Namekian dragon, they could eventually wish Vegeta back and he could take vengeance on Radditz who would most likely put Vegeta's kingdom in opression...but even if you don't do it like that, I know your ideas are always amazing ^_^ Keep up the wonderfulness! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 10, 2003 18:52 PDT
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Nice work, try not to make Vegeta suffer too much in your next stroy you plan to write. I think he's been through enough. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: July 31, 2003 07:13 PDT
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Mmm, nice one. Can't wait to see what happens the morning after. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: July 30, 2003 21:37 PDT
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ahhh.... good now maybe B/V will realize who each other are... update soon |
Reviewed By: Sakura Blue On: July 29, 2003 00:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eep Eep! I'm hoping mebbe something will come up about Bulma's bite mark soon to give away the whole thing. Mebbe Vegeta will notice it the next morning?? I hope the Namek thing is further developed next chappy, one step closer to the couple's reunion ^_^ and poor bra having to deal with Raditz as her "father", ew! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 17:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for letting me post this story to my site. Because of you, I've read tons more B/V's the past couple of weeks and loved them all. Don't worry though. You don't have much competition because this is still truly the best B/V there ever were. All three of the Surviving Togethers ^.~ Keep up the good writing. I'll be here to read it all the way. |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 28, 2003 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome story ill give you that, ive been reading all of your stories and i love all them. keep on writing you are really good. but for this storie i just kinda wish "atae" would just realize that she is bulma already. it is just kinda annoying. im sorry i just wanted to say that. but it is still an awsome story bye |
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