| "Surviving Together: Retribution" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: love On: June 08, 2003 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for next chapie
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Catreena On: June 08, 2003 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, I have been following the "Surviving Together" stories for quite some time now and I think that are really original. Excellent writing. I just can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 08, 2003 19:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
It seems that Radditz wished her back in a way to make her forget about Vegeta. If Trunks sees her then no doubt memories are going to resurface. It seems to me that Bulma must have been pregnant with Bra before Bulma died if Vegeta's the only one that Bra wants to have hold her if she sceams everytime Radditz tries, so that Has to be taken in as a clue to the identity of the girl's REAL father. |
Reviewed By: miayu On: June 08, 2003 19:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwww... this is so cute and sad. Vegeta is meeting a new woman to get over Bulma....But it is Bulma! I love it!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: June 08, 2003 15:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for Vegeta but I also feel for Radditz for Vegeta becuase Radditz took Bulma and Bra for hemself. And for Radditz becuase he never knew how to love someone or how it feels to be loved. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 14:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
THANKKKKKKUUUUUU! UUUUUUU PPPPPDATED!! MMMMMWAAAA!!!! I LOVE YA!!!!!! *HUGS*
Ahem sorry well
FINNAlyyyy he saw her !!!! Bra was so cute in this Chapy and Raddiz babe u r one bad boy !
I cant wait for Trunks reaction!
UPDATEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Evil Saint On: June 07, 2003 12:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awsome twist! I can't wait to see what happens.
(looks hopeful) Can this one pretty please have a happy ending ^_~ |
Reviewed By: strompf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 08:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, damn I like Radditz Oh well. I love the whole series. can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: lil rach On: June 04, 2003 23:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the survivning together series so much its a great story line!!! and now theres the third one i already love the first chapter! y wouldn't I?! :) keep using ut great ideas and writing skills!! i love this story line!! i wonder vegeta is going to say!? lol can't wait till the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: gethmane8 (not logged in) On: June 01, 2003 13:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, very good. So addicting and very intruiging story. Love it! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 07:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
You evil, demented author, twisting everything good into something warped for your amusement! I LOVE IT! This is going to be one wild ride, that's for sure. UPdate soon, PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA!! On: May 31, 2003 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAN KAMI!!!!! FINNALYYYY IM SO HAPPYYYY!!!! .
Radditz My long haired babe is the villian here!!! NOO!!!!!!!! *Nah I love iT!!!!!* BAD BOY BAD!! Eraing Bulmas memory and decieving her!
AWWWW POOOOORRR VEGE!!! DONT REPLACE BULMA!!!! GAROCK! HOW DAREUUU!!!
Ahem Please update soon Im looking foward for the next instalment!!!
LateR! |
Reviewed By: me On: June 16, 2003 11:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic kicks ass!!!
update soon
*me* |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm surprised by the relative "peacefulness" of their reunion!! I mean didn't Vegeta suspect at all that Atae is Bulma? Oh well! I really like the Vegeta/Bra interactions tho : ) In the show Bra has always been a Daddy's girl so it makes sense that baby Bra is attracted to Vegeta. And just what kind of revenge is Radditz plotting? Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: August 25, 2003 09:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
Damn, I actually got teary eyed when Vegeta said he needed her tp prove the last 12 years weren't an illusion! |
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