| "Surviving Together: Retribution" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: Think I'm done unfortunately
Reviewed By: sessakag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2016 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'll stop here with this fanfic unfortunately. Just not
really enjoying it any more. The initial story is what drew me in.
The dynamic between Bulma and Vegeta was very well done in my
opinion, especially maintaining Vegeta's tough guy exterior, but
they spend such a tremendous amount of time apart it's getting a
little boring and I'm finding myself skimming most of the chapters
to get to the romantic dynamic too often and the one it gets there,
anticlimactic and brief that it's just not worth it anymore. So I'm
going to have to pass on the rest of this, though I hate to leave
stories unfinished. Thanks for the time and energy you put into
this and I hope you continue on with your writing passion.
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Title: Think I'm done unfortunately
Reviewed By: sessakag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2016 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'll stop here with this fanfic unfortunately. Just not
really enjoying it any more. The initial story is what drew me in.
The dynamic between Bulma and Vegeta was very well done in my
opinion, especially maintaining Vegeta's tough guy exterior, but
they spend such a tremendous amount of time apart it's getting a
little boring and I'm finding myself skimming most of the chapters
to get to the romantic dynamic too often and the one it gets there,
anticlimactic and brief that it's just not worth it anymore. So I'm
going to have to pass on the rest of this, though I hate to leave
stories unfinished. Thanks for the time and energy you put into
this and I hope you continue on with your writing passion.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: sugarcoated_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2015 06:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pain and fear is so beautifully described it made my heart
ache. Thank you for this beautiful piece.
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how did raditz know about the dragonballs? e-mail jcogginsa@comcast.com
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 01:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! I am glad that you put it on another site. I love it.
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 01:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I am glad that you changed fanfiction(s). You are right. It sucks that they changed their policies on NC17 fanfics. I ma sorry about that, but I will try to change that. I love both of you fanfics that I have read and I will read the acual first one. Can't wait.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 00:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow finally got to read the whole saga...
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Title: Retribution.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: September 09, 2005 00:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, Excellent storytelling, Lavender Goddess. I read all of the Surviving Together and sequel a few years ago. Great writing, interesing plot, the romance, etc......WOW! You are damn good is all I have to say! ^_~ Bura400
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: JasmineJazz On: January 27, 2005 15:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LavenderGoddessV, you are one of the best fanfictional and orginal authors that have ever happen for Dragonball Z fanfiction. After about 2 years (it is now 2005) I wasn't reading no stories on Drangonball Z characters. Then I remember about a good fic. about Bulma and Vegeta. Then I remember that it was you who wrote those good fic. I look for you in fanficiton.net and found out that you no longer post your stories on there no more. So on your homepage I linked you hear in MediaMiner.org. Well to make a long story short, your stories are wonderful, interesting, and very intriguing. I would like to applaud you on your wonderful work. Keep it up. I've grown up and think your stories will be the last time I will read any fanfiction stories. Thank You. Maybe I will run up to your more young adult stories in the future,ne?
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Title: hey its me
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 23:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me Storm05092002 from fanfiction your never gonna belive this but a i used over 200 peices of paper to print this story out lol the funest thing is that its 1 in the morning and i should be going to bed but ive read this story more then 100times over and i dont ever wanna get on and it not be here so i just decided to print the whole damn thing off ^-^ even if i have to stay up all fuckin night to do it ^-^ lol what else what else.... oh ive read allot of your storys but none none of them is so sooooo good and so creative to me u should win an aword... ive read allone over 500 storys short and long and yours i can say is the best story ive ever read ^-^ i wish they could make it a movie cause id be the 1st one to buy it ^-^ u could make millions off of this story and im serious ^-^ well write more and never loose your great imagination cause god knows we all wish we could write something that good ^-^ you bring emotions into this story that most people dont get to feel anymore ^-^ and so i just wanna say thank u for puting it online it most of tooken forever to type up ^_^ (and allso thank u for not maying a space between every fucking sentence....then no matter how much i love this story theres no way in fuckin hell i would of printed it off) well anyway sorry for such a long thing i just wanted u to know how much this story means to me and well i gotta get copying the last one ^-^ cya BethieK.W. one of your biggest favs ^^ (whoo hoo i got over 100s words wroten ^_^) |
Reviewed By: Shinigami In The Form Of Me On: October 22, 2004 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again. Just here to say a few quick words - I won't bore you like last time. I have now read parts two and three and offer congralations on the writings of such well written work. I adwise you continue the story as it is annoying to have such a piece of work forgotten about. I have one question - what happened to Durka? You haven't mentioned him in the third part and I do not recall hearing of his death. Anyway I'll let you go but I advise you take my advise. Ps -I also advise you to read the four parts of the 'Ningen' series which I found extremly interesting and think you would enjoy.
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Reviewed By: VGT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I simply don't know what to say. I spent the good part of a day and a half, with no sleep mind you, reading this. This is a wonderful story, as soon as I started reading it, I couldn't stop, hence my lack of sleep. It's been a while sence I've read a good DBZ story. My favorite characters, besides the two important ones, had to be Trunks, Garock, and Zarra. You charaterized everyone so well, that I beleave Akira Toriyama couldn't have done a better job than you. I think the best thing I liked about your story, is that it was't very pridictable. I don't like stories that are too pridictable, I like stories where you have to keep guessing. I think you are wonderful writer, and as soon as I'm done reviewing this, I'm off to read some thing else of yours. ;} ~VGT~
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: VegetasAngel On: July 18, 2004 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I loved this fanfic!! This has been the best one I've read so far, and it was the most romantic Vegeta and Bulma fanfiction ever. It's so good, that I could read this, and Unfaithful, over and over again and never get tired!!! I can't wait to read your other fanfiction stories!!!!!!!!!! :-)
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 10:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exilent. Very nice. No one can write A/U B/V quite like you can ^_^
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Title: its really over
Reviewed By: smirnoffice_23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 09:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say other than wow. I feel like crying now. I have been reading this story for 2 years now and its over. But it's a nice Christmas present thank you. You are one of the best writers I have ever read. Enjoy your holidays and have a good new year I look forward to reading what ever you have to coming. I'm sure it will be really good.
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